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Inferno
by Southern Comfort → (All Poetry by Southern Comfort)
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Baby, You make me so HOT, You Just Melt ME!

TOO HOT! I am melting!, I must cool down!
In the Volcano Of My Passion, in hot lava I drown!
I am a mindless moth, I embrace and dance with your flame,
Though you incinerate me, I dance on, quite insane!
What is it about you, that fuels my fire?
You whisper words of passion, ingiting my desire.
Arousal is slowly achieved, by a schooled hand,
Makes my body heed each command.
TOO HOT! I must cool down, or I'll turn into steam,
I am a mist you immerse yourself into, while my absent body screams!
You are a Dance With The Devil, In The Pale Moonlight,
Erasing any memory of wrong and right.
Dying, slowly dying, one Little Death after another,
Consumed by your Inferno, void of air, I smother!

Music: Hawaii 5-o

 

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 Reviews of "Inferno"
Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on June 10, 2007
Somebody will be tossing your ashes with this one.
Georg

Reviewed on June 9, 2007
Love it SC! Love it all!
AS we breath again after this long winded fire!
I almost fell in Pat!
as I escaped by the corner of the brim~
WArmly, WArrior Spirit WArrior SheeeOOX
Be SAFE!
STay Positive!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on June 9, 2007
What is it about you, that fuels my fire <-----My big....Chocolate bar

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 9, 2007
Didn't hear the music this time
usually I do hear it...
Book me Danno, for my thoughts...
Love your writing SC...
Hugs...

Reviewed on June 9, 2007
Holy smokes, SC, this one made me SWEAT! WHEE! Very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Little Twister. :D

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on June 9, 2007
...in the mist I control the heat lol
or something like that or maybe not ;)
HOT!

Reviewed on June 9, 2007
SC,

This, my dear, is HOT! Just made the temperature rise about a thousand degrees...well done!!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. *whew*

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 9, 2007
Another hot write well-shared, Patricia Ann. Thank you. Love and good things to you,

Regis (Prof Dreamy)

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on June 9, 2007
S.C.,

You sure got your point across. (lol) I love your writing.

Reviewed by stan nassano
Reviewed on June 9, 2007
ohh baby baby time for a cold shower,
Stan nassano

Reviewed by Lydia Shutter (Reader)
Reviewed on June 9, 2007
Book 'em on charges of too sizzling and extra steamy, Danno! LOL Great work, PA. Lydi**


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