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Feast Of Sins
by Southern Comfort → (All Poetry by Southern Comfort)
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Being a Sin Eater is a family business, handed down from father to child.

My family and I were dirt poor, with hungry mouths and bellies to feed,
We were the town's pariahs, but filled a need.
My father was a Sin Eater,who was called when the Angel Of Death had passed,
No one may look upon his face, he wore a Death Mask.
When he was needed, a note was placed on our door,
With a name, time and place and no more.
Being his children, we had a cross to bear,
The town folks shunned us, pelted us with rocks and nobody cared.
When somebody died, it was my father's job to eat their sins,
This must be done before the departed's soul could ascend.
A feast was laid out on the body, the food father had to eat,
He must sample all,from head to feer.
It would be just father and us in the room,
Just one lone candle glowed in the gloom.
We were made to accompany father, to place leftovers in a sack,
The mourners stood outside the door in a pack.
With each bite father took, he shrieked in pain,
He gobbled, slobbered and looked quite insane.
Demonic laughter cackled, while ghostly figures floated in air,
My brother Henry and I, whispered silent prayers.
We cursed fate, that gave us this plight,
Children should not have to behold these hideous sights.
Father's belly bloated and his eyes cast a yellow glow,
He just became swollen all over and evil from his mouth did flow.
Often during the ceremony the corpse was defiled,
Father's body became possessed, no sight for a child.
When he a finished with the corpse he screamed," It is complete!"
Then the pack of mourners disappeared, so we could retreat.
We would find some coins cast on the ground,
This meant, this is your pay and we don't want you around.
So was the life of the outcast and his lowly spawn,
Father would be hired by everyone.
My father lost his mind and hung himself from a tree,
Henry refused to eat father's sins, so the task was left up to me.
His body was taken down and Mama provided the bread,
She covered his corpse with it, " Eat now," she said.
As I ate, my belly bloated with each sin,
It was agony, but I forced myself to eat again and again.
My eyes glowed, I screamed and retched,
The putrid taste within my mouth, I shall never forget.
I felt the innocence leave my body, as sin and corruption made a home,
This was to be my fate, it would never leave me alone.
The Feast Of Sins, is now how I dine,
My father's plight is now mine.
When the Sin Eater is now required, I make the house call,
It is my screams that can be heard, when night falls.

Music: Dark Angel


      

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 Reviews of "Feast Of Sins"
Reviewed on October 26, 2007

A great poemization filled with impressionistic, surreal and symbolistical imagery... "Feast Of Sins" is rich in contents and fluency... It did impress me.

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on October 25, 2007
Psychological tales are the scariest at the Ball, because they touch a string of fear inside us all.
I remember you telling me that this is where the tradition of bringing food to a deceased persons home came from. Thank you Sissy. Love.

Walt

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on October 25, 2007
This is the best halloween poem of them all! Pretty frightful.

It's an interesting tale that speaks of how the sins of others affect us.

Kathy

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 25, 2007
now this is new, origianal and scary that sends shivers up and down the spine...

Fee

Reviewed on October 25, 2007
This gave me cold chills SC, this is truly frightening and sad.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on October 25, 2007
S.C.,

It's a tough job mine friend but someone's got to do it. Do you want fries with those sins? (lol)

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on October 25, 2007
When the sewers are bloked we need someone to do the job, but we don't want him among us. That's for you society.
If they only knew that Satan don't want a Sin Eater around we would have been telling a different story today.
Eons away from your classical sensual poems, this one is powerful, humand, soul wrenching, truthful and over all an extraordinary and compalling poem up on Andrč Bendavi's literary street.
Georg

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on October 24, 2007
Wow, one fantastic tale of the sin eaters of long ago. A tale of community disdain upon one of its own, yet the come a calling when it is them who needs the assistance. Shocking tale....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on October 24, 2007
Oh my, very scary..
Eat away SC..
Hugs..
Ron

Reviewed by stan nassano
Reviewed on October 24, 2007
wow this is quite scarry SC,glad house calls are a thing of the past,
hugs to you darlin,
stan

Reviewed by Ann Scarborough
Reviewed on October 24, 2007
WOW! Sissy this is GREAT!!!
Love,
annie

Reviewed on October 24, 2007
I've heard about the Sin Eater in Appalacian and Scottish folklore. An excellent write of tradition! Did you know the original Sin Eater is Jesus? :) 'Tis.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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