He was a dreamer looking for his dream and found her at a wishing well.
A dreamer threw a coin in a wishing well and as it flew,
He noticed tears silently hitting the water from eyes of aqua blue.
The beauty of the maiden, took his breath away,
Should he speak and disturb this vision, or just let time play?
He decided to remain silent and just drink in the beauty,
He felt to be witness to her splendor, was his duty.
Her eyes beheld his reflection, mirrored in the sparkling pool,
The moment left him breathless, he became a trembling fool.
She stood and kissed a coin and threw it in the air,
It soon joined other coins, under the water glistening there.
She gazed at the coin, as though it was her last hope,
If her wish was not granted, she could no longer cope.
He could stand it no longer, rushed to her side,
He gathered her closed within his arms and she softly sighed.
" What did you wish for?", he asked, looking into her eyes of aqua blue,
She spoke only one word," You!"
I love "love at first sight" stories and I often wonder if we acted more on our natural impulses when it came to love would the world not be a better place.
hugs
Fee
Nobody has toss a coin in that well wishing for me, but it must be a fortune in pennies down there, I should know, after all I did toss them there.
Georg
Reviewed by Rey C (Reader)
Reviewed on January 14, 2008
drawn in the genuineness of your words,
letting feeling and emotion come forth
in simple and profound ways, aloha!
The wistful yearning of the two is so touching. You timed everything in perfect pitch. Hooked me in and I held my breath until she spoke...You. Awesome. Liz
Oooh, I love this my friend, mystical, mysterious, romantic and tender with a fairytale quality. Very touching write, flows smoothly, swiftly and captivates the reader leaving them with a warm and happy feeling...well done!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 14, 2008
A moving love poem
Thanks for comin back to us SC
You've been gone too long this time
with love
Ron
Sylvia Masters, a hot fifty-two year old widow and CEO of her husbands company is challenged by her own instincts, family and friends when the Lieutenant investigating the murder of her ex-fiancee ask her to dinner. After a tumultuous beginning, the
Miss you ((yourDreamyGal))
Well that explains my luck I guess i have to stop using slugs
Amor
hugs
Fee
Walt
Love Tinka
Georg
letting feeling and emotion come forth
in simple and profound ways, aloha!
Be safe,
Karen
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Thanks for comin back to us SC
You've been gone too long this time
with love
Ron