Born a loser; Born a loser: Homo Sapiens. We're so like the god who made the dodo bird! Is it only 'cause we're stupid We are losers, Or 's it because we think We're so divine? Do we spoil our home to complement our ego, Or 's this the way we explicate our shame? Every vow that we make In our pipe dream 's grand I-zation! Compensation? Are you bloody insane, Homo Sapiens, Or is ours just a young (still dumb) SELF-seeking Brain?
Maybe we're so like God because we made him in our own image.
A very good poem, posing questions, raising doubts. We seem to be in danger of drowning in sentimentality
Well, I do think the human race has a lot of potential, but it does seem to spawn far too many crazies. However, the accomplishments
of mankind are legion, and I think they fairly well outweigh the evil deeds done by man.
lol, ain't we somethin' else? now, if this reality were something other than illusion, i think your observations might be valid. but since it is, perhaps the underlying reality makes a mockery of the dream, you think? wonderful and insightful work, poet.
Reviewed by D. Fitzpatrick (Reader)
Reviewed on March 8, 2003
Well, Glen, I think your poem hits a few nails
on the head. Good structure. Well chosen words. And, oh, thanks for your good review.
well, well, well shit how would I know I struggle just to survive that is a little too heavy for me to answer...ppl are ppl respect the difference and we can get along....if not oh well we have what we have
very interesting write
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Guess we simply did not develop the way He expected us to. What went wrong?
A very good poem, posing questions, raising doubts. We seem to be in danger of drowning in sentimentality
of mankind are legion, and I think they fairly well outweigh the evil deeds done by man.
on the head. Good structure. Well chosen words. And, oh, thanks for your good review.
very interesting write