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Sweet Dissension
by pat medlin → (All Poetry by pat medlin)
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Sweet dissension flows through our veins.

Delicate tendrils of trust unplugged, 

dangle in uncertainty.

Passionate admiration

the anchor

grounding us in time...

Sweet loving dissension

beyond all reason or ryhme

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Sweet Dissension"
Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on August 14, 2012
A brilliant portrait of life in very few words: Without dissent life is nothing.
Ed

Reviewed on August 12, 2012
I used to dangle up until July 2012
when I got connected with some Jesus Juice :)
Through my blind eyes I can now see
(walking in faith)
I 2nd Steven Very Powerful!!
Love & The Lord's Precious Bounty
Vickie

Reviewed by Barbara Terry
Reviewed on December 10, 2010
Many people will not get what this poem is about. But some would say that 'sweet dissension' is an oxymoron, others would say there is no such thing, and still others would be scratching their heads wondering what was said here.

You have taken the human condition and made it into a reality for us to see that our sweet dissensions flow through our veins unplugging a delicate trust, whatever delicate trust that may be. This poem has an ethereal quality to it. Thank you for sharing.

May the Lord Jesus bless you and always be with you, and walk by your side always. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, and (((((((((((((((((((((((((MANY, MANY HUGGGSSS)))))))))))))))))))))))), your den sister, Barbie

Reviewed by Steve Groll
Reviewed on November 17, 2010
Powerful concept.

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on October 7, 2010
The devil made me do it despite my dissension. Patrick

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on October 5, 2010
Oh that devil called dissension can be so deviceve, and yes, usually beyond all reason or rhyme...great write Pat...

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on October 3, 2010
I read this piece aloud also and I enjoyed it. Then I read it to myself and enjoyed it too.


GOD BLESS YOU
TONY

Reviewed on October 3, 2010
I third Christine, delicate tendrils of trust. This is a spectacular write! -Morgan.

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on October 3, 2010
Yes, Pat,
Christine is right, this poem stands the test of being read aloud
and with its fine phrasing, unbroken flow and superior word choices it is very worthwhile indeed.

John

Reviewed by David Maclellan
Reviewed on October 3, 2010
Those little niggling, wonderings that reside in the corners of our minds...I sometimes think that these are the emotions that keep the contempt out of the relationship that familiarity breeds. A deceptively deep poem Pat, I love it!
Best regards
David

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on October 3, 2010
The flow is rhythmic on this poem, well done

Carole~

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on October 3, 2010
I have found this is a great poem to read out loud. My favorite line is "Delicate tendrils of trust unplugged".
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on October 3, 2010
Enjoyed very much..Hugsss


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