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Incredible Work of Art
by pat medlin → (All Poetry by pat medlin)
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I stand back unseen...
watching in admiration as he moves from room to room

tentativly yet with confidence and grace

A well built handsome man.
His aqualine nose and strongly defined cheekbones bring memories of his father's good looks

I watch unseen...
as my grandchildren clamor around his legs begging for a ride on his broad shoulders...a push on the swing or a wild tumble in the grass. 

He's their tyer of shoes...fixer of toys...dryer of tears...artist and teacher...painter of enchanting imagination

I move around unseen...
laughing as his contagious wit and quiet humor fill the cozy kitchen. 

I watch him unseen...
as he moves back and forth from house to car
loading the wonderful remnants of the day...boxes bags and toys

'Daddy! Daddy!...look! I drew you a picture.  Here! show it to your heart.'

I stand unseen
As he puts down his load and crouches to a four year old's level...takes the picture...traces every detail with his fingers then moves it slowly around on his chest

'Daddy! Daddy...did your heart tell you?  Is it a good one ?'

'Yes son...I especially like this part'

How could I think that I'd been watching unseen
when all the while he was seeing me...
seeing me with his heart

My son, my amazing son...this incredible work of art

 

 

  

 

 

 

 

 

 


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Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on December 24, 2010
A very special work...neatly packaged with so much love and caring...truly enjoyable...


Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on December 24, 2010
INDEED! HE'S AN UNIQUE...WORK OF ART...THAT WILL NEVER LOSE ITS VALUE OR BEAUTY. WHAT AN AMAZING AND INSPIRING OBSERVATION, PAT...THANKS SO VERY MUCH FOR SHARING THIS KEEPER. LOVE AND BLESSINGS TO YOU AND YOURS AND MAY YOU HAVE A WONDERFUL AND JOYOUS CHRISTMAS AND NEW YEAR! KEEP THE FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed on December 21, 2010
A beautiful portrait of a beautiful man, this touched me so deeply.

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on December 15, 2010
This is utterly captivating, Pat, the way you have written this. I have the greatest admiration for inspiring guides like this, for moments like this.
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on December 15, 2010
Amazing art comes in many forms. Patrick

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on December 15, 2010
Our son's Make us proud don't they. Great piece of writing, Pat.


GOD BLESS YOU
TONY

Reviewed by Richard King
Reviewed on December 15, 2010
This type of amazing doesn't just happen, it is learned. My guess would be that he had an amazing teacher who, as you said, he was "seeing .. with his heart." Like this one a lot, Pat.

Thanks Dick

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on December 15, 2010
Sometimes we are at our best while simply observing...lovely piece of writing.

Cheers,
Dan


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