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smoke, smoke, smoke those cigarettes. it ain't been your ten minutes yet. what's your number? what's your chip? stand in line, don't ya' slip. smoke, smoke, smoke those cigarettes. 10 - 2 & 4 is all ya' gets. all right that ain't true . git some more, maybe a time or two. what's a poor addict gonna' do? smoke, smoke, smoke those cigarettes. ya' got 10 minutes. that's all ya' get. this little ryhme inspired by a recent stay in the hospital where they limited my time to feed that particular addiction of mine. pi**ed me off.

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Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on April 27, 2002

Heehee! I know it was very hard for you, but I hope it did work you.

Interesting write Steve!!!!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on April 27, 2002

Reminds me of an old country tune ... emphazema, cancer, and a bad cough, that's all ya git for spending all your pocket change on that dirty shit.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 27, 2002

I smoked for thirty years, just because I quit, doesn't mean I can tell anyone else to quit. So.....QUIT....!!!... you'll be so proud of yourself...hope your okay now...

Reviewed by Scada (Reader)

Reviewed on April 27, 2002

Hey sweetie... hope you're feeling all right. I understand about the limits on smoking, because I just recently imposed those limits on myself. I had managed to stop smoking for quite awhile, then started again. My health was really suffering though, and I quit again. It's been 2 and a half weeks since I last smoked. WOOOOHOOOOOO!!

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on April 27, 2002

i want to say i understand but i don't hope you feel better though......cool poem

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on April 27, 2002

Stay strong...stay healthy :)

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on April 27, 2002

Hahaha great one, since I stopped smoking years ago, I used to know the feeling, but I am so so glad I stopped. Nice write, floria

Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)

Reviewed on April 27, 2002

Different write. Nice one Steve...so you're making up on all the cigs you missed eh? Hope you're feeling much better :)

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell

Reviewed on April 27, 2002

Ahhhh, now that I've had a smoke (LOL) I feel a lot better and the poem is great!

Love, Janet xoxoxo

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