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Untitled Because It's Incomplete
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sitting
by the shore
feeling the ocean breeze,
hearing the waves gently role to the shore,
staring at foot prints in the sand,
seeing the clouds passing by.
sittin' and wonderin' "Why?".

not of the past.
not of those things that must last.
but of Today
and it's way.
and of Tomorrow
will it bring more sorrow?

the breeze blows by, where does it go?
the waves roll in & out again.
the foot prints of people come & gone.
the clouds float off into the sky.
and i sit here and wonder "Why?".

my life is the breeze, it passes with ease,
like the waves lost to the sea,
foot prints there in the sand,
clouds there in the sky.
somehow my life is passing by.
and i sit here and wonder "Why?".

i've been working on this for a while. it never seemed to come together, to be right. then i realized, it's like my life. how appropriate.-steve

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Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 21, 2002
conceptually conclusive...

Reviewed by Samantha Hendricks (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2002
Absolutely beautifull. My favorite yet and I agree that it is COMPLETE. Perfect just the way it is. I will re-read this one often. Thank you.
Take care - Samantha

Reviewed by Samantha Hendricks (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2002
editing a poem is correct, but the time comes when you have to stop. This poem is perfect as far as I can see.

Reviewed on May 20, 2002
You seem to have taken a more serious form of poetry for the past little while. I like this. I think this is complete.

Well-done Steve!!!!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)
Reviewed on May 19, 2002
One of your best writes Steve! This poem is not hungry for words, but it is hungry for thoughts. It looks like a poem that comes out when you think with a lot of depth which is not always. Excellent write... :)

Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on May 19, 2002
~10~ Excellent.

Steve, that 'why' ! I try not to ask these days...and fail at that. Enjoyed your poem. Now, you enjoy your ocean! <that's a command>

Gina

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on May 19, 2002

Very very nice Steve...

Reviewed by Cheryl Shoemaker
Reviewed on May 19, 2002
Steve,
Is often said..it's the journey, not the destination...
enjoy the journey, my friend..

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
Reviewed on May 19, 2002
Namaste Steve;
I love this one, and I could truly relate to it.. Lets hope that the story continues for years to come.
Love and Light
dreamweaver

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 19, 2002
like the way you did this ...very nice....hope you don't finish it for a long time...;-)

Reviewed by D. Enise
Reviewed on May 19, 2002
I thought, this to be perfect.
I agree 100% with Elizabeth.
I wonder why too.....
*hug*
~Jen

Reviewed by Elizabeth Galvez
Reviewed on May 19, 2002
It is complete...in spirit...only a matter of time before you see its end...hopefully a very long time...great write

Reviewed on May 19, 2002
if that be the case, my friend....let it unroll slowly and naturally...for it will be a never ending story.
hugs
krissy


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