why is it....
seems only ones read me
and review are mostly women?
do i really just write that
kinda shit?
the ones the women like,
with them be a hit?
i mean i write
all kind a stuff...
but only reviews i get
are women...guess that's enuff"
oh...greg and jay,
they come along...
but women always seem
to sing what i sung.
even robert the ace,
yeah he taakes some space...
but women they come along.
not in my life....
nawh
not in my heart...
women just seem to readme...
and review.
damn i guess it's bettern'
what i knew.
bettern'
gettin' screwed...
by old loves...
old love.
yeah so whats new?
women keep readin'...
keep feedin'
my ego...
but go slow...
hurts some times don't you know?
i do love you women...
yup i do.
love you women...]
wish i could find one
that would love me too.
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Reviewed by Silvia (Reader)
Reviewed on June 24, 2002
I enjoy your poetry ...
Reviewed by Tomas Ughdair (Reader)
Reviewed on June 23, 2002
Hi Steve,
I seldom ever read your poems,but seeing you have asked a question are you prepared to except an honest answer?
Me think's you may be better off being thankful for what you get
Morchuis
come on, don't be so hard on yourself... just keep writing...
Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan
Reviewed on June 23, 2002
I have to agree with Alexander. Read these lines:
bull shit.
Bull Shit.
that's what Love is.
Bulll Shit.
Love is...
Bull Shit.
give a Heart,
take a Heart.
Bull shit.
that is LOve.
Bull Shit.
This is not poetry. It's bullshit. I give you a 10 for such brilliance.
Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
Reviewed on June 23, 2002
Yes, I think your poetry is bad. And this is not an anonymous remark. Good luck.
Reviewed by Gregory Sonn (Reader)
Reviewed on June 23, 2002
Hi steve,
I love your work. It's very down to earth and personal. easy to read at least to me. I got a few of the anonymous shitbirds myself yesterday and got all kinds of bad remarks from them. If they won't post or tell who they are then they are cowards, simple as that. Until they post something and put themselves on the line then they should have no valid understanding of this forum. I like your work and honesty. Gregg
Reviewed by John
Reviewed on June 23, 2002
I guess your writing sucks, and women feel sorry for you.
Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)
Reviewed on June 23, 2002
Hehhee Steve, I think you need a Public Relations Officer to handle this problem..;)
Reviewed by krissy
Reviewed on June 22, 2002
just on a count a cuz.
keep on keepin on, kiddo.
hugs to ya
krissy
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I seldom ever read your poems,but seeing you have asked a question are you prepared to except an honest answer?
Me think's you may be better off being thankful for what you get
Morchuis
bull shit.
Bull Shit.
that's what Love is.
Bulll Shit.
Love is...
Bull Shit.
give a Heart,
take a Heart.
Bull shit.
that is LOve.
Bull Shit.
This is not poetry. It's bullshit. I give you a 10 for such brilliance.
I love your work. It's very down to earth and personal. easy to read at least to me. I got a few of the anonymous shitbirds myself yesterday and got all kinds of bad remarks from them. If they won't post or tell who they are then they are cowards, simple as that. Until they post something and put themselves on the line then they should have no valid understanding of this forum. I like your work and honesty. Gregg
keep on keepin on, kiddo.
hugs to ya
krissy