I keep peekin'
over the walls
to see if
Life's still out there.
Yup!
It's You.
Life'l do
if there's You.
Love'l do
If it's You.
sneakin'.
peekin'.
seekin'.
Yup.
It's you.
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Reviews of "Yup...It's You"
Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
Reviewed on July 24, 2002
What a creative write Steve..
Namaste'
Melanie
Reviewed by Melody Mortenson (Reader)
Reviewed on July 24, 2002
Steve;
another wonderful write! Beautifully simple words for explaining a most precious emotion. Sounds like you have 'snuck', 'peeked', 'sought' and FOUND love.
HUGZ
Melody Ann
The Matchmaker:
Angela Calminetti, mother of five, New Age practitioner and gifted psychic and telepath, is proud of her family ties and does everything she can to make sure that all of her younger siblings are as happy in love and marriage
Crystal Reed thought she had met the perfect man. Instead she finds herself entangled in a web of obsessive love and dark secrets, a world that has become tainted by deception and treachery.
Namaste'
Melanie
another wonderful write! Beautifully simple words for explaining a most precious emotion. Sounds like you have 'snuck', 'peeked', 'sought' and FOUND love.
HUGZ
Melody Ann