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i saw death in her eyes
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i sat by her bed and held her hands for an hour or more i cryed i saw death in her eyes
tryed ta' tell her wahta good mother she'd been tried ta' ask forgiveness for the heartache i'd given tried not to know i'm losin' her tried ot ta;' feel what i had ta' feel i held her hands held 'em tight tonight i kkew i's losin her saw it in her eys she'd ready ta' die so i cried & walked away didn't think i'd see her another day i cryed i saw death in her eyes mom, i love you goodbye go ta' sleep be at peace mom, die

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Reviewed by Nancy D.

Reviewed on April 9, 2003

Steve,
You have my sympathy, and my prayers go out to you and your family.

Nancy

Reviewed by Eroica Mendoza (Reader)

Reviewed on April 8, 2003

you know one of the elements of life we can't deny is that everything ends... losing someone we love is something we never want to have yet we do all in the end... this has been very very moving...

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on April 8, 2003

STEVE,
tHIS ONE IS PAINFUL EXCELLENT TRIBUTE.
pEG

Reviewed by Lizz Clements (Reader)

Reviewed on April 8, 2003

Great write, Steve! Very powerful and painful.

Reviewed by john zimmerman

Reviewed on April 8, 2003

powerful, and pain filler
good write

john+

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