I love the fantasy element in this, Dawn... I have read it that this is an unrequited longing, but I could be wrong. Either way, it is silkenly romantic and subtle, and it flows along so beautifully - like love's never-failing stream. You are one of several writer's that I know here who, I think, probably use visual presentation to maximum effect and to make a tangible contribution to the meaning of their work. Your poetry is always, without a doubt, ALWAYS excellent, Dawn, and I hope you never think otherwise!!! TY Kate xx
excellent .... Dawn
William ...peace
a fertile feel throughout this gem of a poem.
Beautifully described and felt;-)
Andrea
love Tinka
and the verse is just so nice. Brava!
Sandie May Angel
Peter