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Sticky Fingers
by Rebecca Lerwill → (All Poetry by Rebecca Lerwill)
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maybe my dislike for all this Valentine's day hoopla triggered this, I don't know. But it's different from my usual work, and I like it.

No need to be fattened up
No need for a heart shaped praline box
Don't give a damn about another Hallmark card
Sorry, no need for pink bunny slippers
or
a red hot thong – lace scratches, don’t you know!


Chocolate…
how presumptuous of you to think
that a sudden burst of sweets
and a cute smile and a wink
will get me to share the sheets
with you.
It doesn’t -

because I don’t need to be told
and you don’t need to be told
that we have to be told
‘I love you’
just because the calendar says so.


Perhaps you need to be reminded
that Valentine d
erived from an ancient word
valens
  - which means worthy….
are you?
Let’s find out…
why don’t you come over
and together we’ll know whether

you are valens to be my Valentine…
I make you mine
sweet and devine ~~
and let me show you how I am tricky
without chocolate I'll get your fingers sticky......




 


 
 
 
 
 
 


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 Reviews of "Sticky Fingers"
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on February 15, 2008
Hmnnn Becca now where do you keep that har of honey. LOL Good write and yes it can be too commercialized but I still say it gives us romantic souls a chance to burst out of the closet and show what we can do...
Fee

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 13, 2008
Naughty girl...You!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on February 13, 2008
A very seductive poem Becca. A very seductive poem Becca. A very seductive poem Becca! Clever write lady. Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on February 13, 2008
Becca This is amazingly beautiful
enjoyed your wonderful humor and thoughts
Love & Peace be with you always

William

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on February 13, 2008
Becca,

Good one! Every day should be a holiday and each celebrated as our last. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 13, 2008
WOW!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on February 12, 2008
pretty steamy!!as well as clever

Reviewed by ellen george
Reviewed on February 12, 2008
Whooooohooo Becca!!
This is a wonderful tribute to your most worthy love!!
I think a lot of us are going to print and put in our cards on the 14th!!
You are an amazing writer!
Keep 'em coming!!! We all love them!!
becka

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 12, 2008
hahahahaha, though not all funny the last verse is ,and it's perfect!;-)wtg Becca!

Love,
ET

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on February 12, 2008
Hot Dog Girl, This is a Valens of a Write.

Walt

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 12, 2008
Your write here is much worthy.
I'm not big on Holidays...
Hugs
Ron

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on February 12, 2008
LOL It is important to tell your significant other - I Love You, many times a day, not just Valentine's Day. On the other hand, it is nice to get that unexpected bigger and better than usual surprise, I think.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed on February 12, 2008
I thought I was the only one who hated Valentine's Day; guess not. I still do like the message of love; however when one doesn't have anyone, it's hard to handle. Good write, though, Rebecca; well penned!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on February 12, 2008
Oh my this is a precious and delightful write....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed on February 12, 2008
Well, now if this invitation isn't acted upon - wow!!!!!! Excellent, Rebecca - bet they storm down your Den!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on February 12, 2008
Stiff little fingers... But hang on a mo' "a red hot thong" nowt wrong with a red hot thong... As a young lass said to me it ain't called VD day for nowt....

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on February 12, 2008
A good twist, and I love Valentine's day, but this was a really unique way of looking at the holiday.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 12, 2008
I love this because I have avowed to ignore the Valentine's days and most of the other days which are made to fatten the merchants pockets . . . Christmas included . . . I bet two=thirds of the population of America don't even realize what Christmas is all about . . . Loved this . . .


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