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Lover's language (Tanka)
by Rebecca Lerwill → (All Poetry by Rebecca Lerwill)
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crisp air filled with love
whispery snowflakes tickle
then, bodies unite
as naughty promises speak
the language of two lovers

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 Reviews of "Lover's language (Tanka)"
Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on December 20, 2008
This is a lovely and beautiful tanaka,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by J AG
Reviewed on November 24, 2008
Sometimes the less said, the better. Ah, the joy of a carefully placed whisper .... Intoxicating poetry!

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on November 21, 2008
PERFECT!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on November 20, 2008
Wonerfully romantic...
x0x0x0

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on November 20, 2008
Combined with a fire in the fireplace, love blossoms....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on November 20, 2008
Something to keep anyone warm in winter!

Georg


Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on November 20, 2008
crisp air turns steamy in the passion of two lovers -- powerful line, "as naughty promises speak the language of two lovers" -- peace and love to you Becca --JMW

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 20, 2008
Very Good!

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on November 19, 2008
Your words are fresh with a class of romance...well done!
Christine

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on November 19, 2008
awesome and visual write

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on November 19, 2008
This is good Rebecca - it paints a palpable scene. Love the form.
Richard

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on November 19, 2008
soft, warm, tender, and gentle.... very nice, blessings, Holly

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 19, 2008
Melting the snow with a warm embrace!
Lovely tanka!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed on November 19, 2008
Fire to melt the snows outside ... well done, Rebecca.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on November 19, 2008
Beautiful Rebecca using just enough penned words to make it perfect. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 19, 2008
Ah Becca as we had our first snowfall yesterday I sat here with a nice cup of tea and watched the magic happen...it(snow) does seem to have an almost hypnotic affect on lovers of all ages...does't it. Nice to see your name up on the board again.
hugs
fee


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