You are smart and sensitive, which is a deadly depressing combination most of the time (not to the reader but to the writer--the person). You seem keen on the generalities and deliver them well. I wonder how incredibly rich and interesting the details are though; I wonder if you fear the therapy your words may hold for you (and others).
I really like this one. Don't remember reading it before. I just don't know if the rhyme at the end does anything for me. You might play with that a bit.
April (aka. booty rabbit)
Film Stars! Dancing! Popcorn!
At last, a life story with everything but the movie stuff edited out.This amusing memoir chronicles film critic Betty Jo Tucker's love affair with film from the 1930s through the beginning of the new millennium
Personal journals are full of potential, waiting for you to add the color! Pages for you to fill in the blanks with tidbits and trivia about New Mexico
I can't wait to read what you write next.
April (aka. booty rabbit)