Incomplete (poem) by Jenni Kalicharan on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on June 9, 2003

Jenni this is definitely a haunting write of emptiness exceptionaly well done!!!!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Steve Ralph

Reviewed on June 9, 2003

perfection as always..
hugs steve xxx

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 9, 2003

lovely write, jenni! (((HUGS))) and love from america, your friend, karen lynn. :)

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on June 9, 2003

Beautifully and so well stated.

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on June 9, 2003

So sad, from one who's been there....like so many of us, huh? Thank you for sharing...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 9, 2003

Sad write....with a emptyness within!!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on June 9, 2003

Pain weaves its way through out this, it would make a good greeting card, but it would be wasted talent, you're poetry is to good fot them...

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on June 8, 2003

OH Jenni,
this is so alone and sad in the verses.
{Hugs}
Peg

I agree would make a great greeting card.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on June 8, 2003

Know this feeling! Great writing.

It is errie when cars are not on a highway in the middle of a day.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 8, 2003

You have a way with words Jenni;-)! a good sad one!

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip

Reviewed on June 8, 2003

Good one, Jenni. Emptiness beautifully stated.
Write on!
Leland

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on June 8, 2003

How about, Like the sandwhich without a coke?
Excellent verses my island friend...and always,
I thank you for your comments.

Reviewed by Tiana

Reviewed on June 8, 2003

Awww girl, what a touching write! Who could possibly stay away from you? Not me! lol Thanks hun, I DID receive your e-mail and it brought me a big smile. You made my day! Course you already know that! :) I miss you too... lots!

I love you,
Tee ;-p

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on June 8, 2003

Jenni, this is wonderful! This verse would be great for a greeting card!