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If I Whispered Through My Mind
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If I Whispered Through My Mind

I love you …

can you sense my thoughts
if I send them
across a crowded world
or in your dreams,
while I lay here inept at sleep,
your head making its familiar dimple
in the pillow where you are …
do you ever reach out
with your own thoughts
when you need me
and I'm not there …
would you hear me
if I whispered


I want you ...

through my mind?
 

 



  

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 Reviews of "If I Whispered Through My Mind"
Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on October 8, 2006
Oh I do believe in that cerebral connection. Have you ever had someone come so strongly into your mind, that you can feel their presence. I have come to the conclusion that when that happens, its because they are thinking of you at that very moment, causing brain signals to connect. Distance does not matter............this transcends......
Timely write, in the age of the internet, and world travel.
we are so near..........and so far.
pax A

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on October 7, 2006
This is so moving and beautiful expressed emotions.. And Rhyme flawless....

peace,
joselyn

Reviewed by Michelle Mills
Reviewed on October 7, 2006
I think that when hearts are connected, their thoughts are connected as well. My husband and I have this bond. I always know what he's thinking and feeling, even when I'm not in the room with him. And he with me. Beautiful write CJ. Michelle

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on October 7, 2006
Sometimes when the eyes connect, thoughts can be transmitted silently.

I have had experiences like this with Michele, my wife. At work she is thinking something and she calls and I am thinking exactly the same thing.

I don't understand it, and can only assume that it is a work of the Holy Spirit because of the love that two share.

Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on October 7, 2006
I like how this love poem is centered in the head, you really transferred that well to the reader. I think that many can relate to this experience.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 7, 2006
Love is a surprizing thing with the power to do many things, wonderful thoughts that you express here along that line CJ.

Fee

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on October 7, 2006
Love your poetry..
just love it!

vesna:)

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 7, 2006
Such sweet yearning in this superb poem! Exquisite write CJ!

ET

Reviewed on October 7, 2006
Beautiful, CJ!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 7, 2006
I am sure when soul mate connect they connect in any way!!

I HOPE!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on October 7, 2006
I received this and hope that special someone does the same...Ed

Reviewed by Rusty Daily
Reviewed on October 7, 2006
Soft and touching thought, exceeded only by it's telling.

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on October 7, 2006
Beautiful and well expressed. Alas telepathy is pure science fiction, although some do have it like twins. Victor

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on October 7, 2006
CJ

Very beautiful and thoughtful sentiments..
Love always hears itself calling

Hugs

Peter


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