Barefoot and
holding hands
we waded
the water’s edge.
I remember
looking down
at our hands.
I couldn’t tell
where your fingers
stopped
and mine began
and how good
that felt.
Pants rolled up
mid-calf,
we flirted
with the waves
and you wrote
my name
in the sand
with your big toe
and we laughed
until we cried.
We talked
about you,
and me,
and whispered
of us.
The colors
of sunset
blended the
blue-green water
right into the sky
as we packed
our things
and put on
sandy shoes
and I had never
felt such joy
and sweet abandon.
Sometimes at night
when sleep
is a stranger
and the covers
are up chin tight
thoughts turn
to a beach,
talk of you,
and of me,
and how the us
became the
sweet abandon.
We never spoke of
things that could
get in the way
and how to
push them aside.
We never
gave a thought
to an end
at all
and I can’t go
barefoot
without thinking
of you.
This is very touching and poignant, C.J. His footprints are very much gently imprinted upon your heart, and with his hand locked into yours, strolls ever close with you along the corridors of your museum of priceless recollections.
So jam packed with imagery and emotion CJ!
A great write indeed!
"... I couldn’t tell
where your fingers stopped
and my fingers began..." This line is beautiful!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
I think, when we want everything to last forever ,we should capture it and bottle it. The feeling then is immortal love. There's nothing llike it.
Your words returned the bliss I felt at one time.
Youth lives forever or so they think. I was hoping for a happier ending. How sad.
Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)
Reviewed on December 14, 2006
Beautiful poem. My imagination is running wild. Memories are so preserved in us. To have a love and to lose it,i can relate.
Well done.
Gods Speed!
Michael
CJ, this is such an astounding poem of love and when in love, that is all that matters. Written with both a regret and happiness of what had been. You are in top form with this one.
loveya
Rusty
Sylvia Masters, a hot fifty-two year old widow and CEO of her husbands company is challenged by her own instincts, family and friends when the Lieutenant investigating the murder of her ex-fiancee ask her to dinner. After a tumultuous beginning, the
Love the beach
peace be with you
Love & Peace
William
Love Tinka
fine and loving piece...I liked the walk this write gave.
Allen
A great write indeed!
"... I couldn’t tell
where your fingers stopped
and my fingers began..." This line is beautiful!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Your words returned the bliss I felt at one time.
Love,
Susan
Micke
Blessings,
Joselyn
Brett
Well done.
Gods Speed!
Michael
enjoyed your poem.....Art Sun...
loveya
Rusty
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