Rhythms (poem) by CJ Heck on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by George Thompson

Reviewed on January 18, 2007

Beautiful. These words mentally bring the images into play. You are very articulate.
George

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan

Reviewed on January 17, 2007

Metaphorically explosive, CJ....and mighty, mighty grand this love!
Love,
Taylor

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on January 17, 2007

True poetry penned with deep thought. Enjoyed

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 16, 2007

"rhythms" is a wonderful example of analogy and metaphor ...

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on January 16, 2007

My own heart fills with the true love, unbroken in your poem and in your heart. It is rare and always will be secure.
Lovely pen, CJ.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on January 16, 2007

Enjoyed this CJ so much, love how you've captured the rhythm through nature...splendid! Great use of metaphors, you have also captured the very essence of love within your lines and the roller coaster of a ride that love sometimes takes us on. Love is often times as exciting and exilerating as the volcoano, the swelling surge of lightning, and then at others as tender and gentle as the sunset...oh you are a true romantic my friend...loved it down to the final line..a memory is born each time your touch warms again...simply divine!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on January 16, 2007

A glorious write CJ.

Reviewed by Brett Moore

Reviewed on January 16, 2007

Good metaphors. "Every sunset is nature's afterglow"- What a great line.

Brett

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 16, 2007

Delightful offering!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on January 16, 2007

You depict nature's rhythms magnificently and contrast it with your love. Beautiful. Victor

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 16, 2007

CJ,

This. Is my new favorite of yours. You capture the rhythm perfectly, succinctly, beautifully. Thank you! DEFINATELY a keeper.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Rusty Daily

Reviewed on January 16, 2007

You may have surpassed yourself with this one CJ. Great use of the metaphor with nature and love.
loveya
Rusty

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on January 16, 2007

this is just fabulous, CJ!!

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed on January 16, 2007

CJ~ this is so moving..."Rhythms" can be felt in every line! The flow of emotions, how they rise and fall among the touch of man, like the waves,the volcanic blow, the lightening's surge...
and then the, fall into your arms, in a sunset afterglow...
Wow!
I keep! Smiles!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)

Reviewed on January 16, 2007

We are all so blessed for natures beauty and to compare this with mans touch,Well,absolutely beautiful write,excellent imagery,
Awesome,

Michael

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on January 16, 2007

Everything in Gods creation has perfect rhythms, love the metaphors used...

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on January 16, 2007

Agree with Jeanette, the touch of a woman is so synonymous with nature in the upheavel it can cause a man whose in love.

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on January 16, 2007

You've captured nature so beautifully in "Rhythms". But you've also captured the analogy to someone's touch (it can make one feel like the beauty of nature.)

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 16, 2007

oh CJ this is special love the way the poem word images and layout ebb and flow like the ocean of which you refer. Very well done.

Fee

Reviewed by Lynn Barry

Reviewed on January 16, 2007

Not only is this a great poem, it reminds us to not take God's creations for granted. Thanks!

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on January 16, 2007

CJ, this was beautiful and inspiring!!!!!

Sandie May Angel :o)