Love's Wings (poem) by CJ Heck on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on April 11, 2007

love this Cj, especially, the line, a rainbow all within itself"

love One

maybe none,
today I feel like a zero,
searching for my hero

Reviewed by Sharon Jordan

Reviewed on February 10, 2007

Dear CJ,

What a beautiful poetic analogy. May you always be held with tender love and gentleness.

Blessings,
Sharon

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)

Reviewed on February 9, 2007

Very sweet, CJ! Easy to read and easy on the heart.

Ted

Reviewed by Brett Moore

Reviewed on February 9, 2007

What a great contrast in this - "Hold me close/with open arms" Very stimulating love poem, CJ.

Brett

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on February 9, 2007

Painted with long, smooth strokes, you let your poetic colours show strongly here, CJ. This lives and breathes and is like a cooling breeze on a humid summer's day. So clearly expressed and non-cloying. And yet the sincere intensity is penetrating. Has all the charm and mesmerising influence of the sight of those glorious opened wings stationary on a petal before your eyes. Gorgeous, thank you. Kate xx

Reviewed by Richard Orey

Reviewed on February 9, 2007

Weak-spirited, possessive men are too often the violators. Since they can't be trusted, they think ill of everyone else.

Your words are so romantically seductive:
"Hold me close with open arms."
You're the master, CJ!
Richard

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 8, 2007

one has to appreciate beauty before it can be held close to the heart ...

beautiful poem, CJ ...

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on February 8, 2007

CJ!!!!!
"A butterfly fluttered by,
one of life’s tiny miracles,
a rainbow all within itself,
riding the wind,
peaceful and free.
beautiful poem and art I love this one keeping it.

Blessings,
Joselyn

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on February 8, 2007

Carefiul with the delicate heart of a free flyer. This is beautiful C J .
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones

Reviewed on February 8, 2007

A beautiful write and oh, so true!
"and so it is with me.
Hold me close
with open arms.
Only then, will I
feel free to be with you..."

God Bless
Love always
Lena

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on February 8, 2007

You are right, CJ. Love can be very fragile; as fragile as it is precious. And yet, it is really all that matters. Thank you. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 8, 2007

YES! CJ, this is spot on perfection in gorgeous verse: well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Robert Harrison (Reader)

Reviewed on February 8, 2007

This old godger is willing to give you a grandfatherly hug.

This is so delightful.

Robert

Reviewed by S J (Reader)

Reviewed on February 8, 2007

My, this is stunning work, CJ! I love this poem.
"It reminded me of love.
If you find it,
hold it gently
to your heart.
Squeeze it tight,
or chafe its wings,
it, too, will die"

Beautifully written!

Thank you
Love, Sheila

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on February 8, 2007

and so it is with me.
Hold me close
with open arms.
Only then, will I
feel free to be with you. <----ok behind the bikeshed again? seya after skool is out...

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on February 8, 2007

A beautiful write CJ
Enjoyed much
Happt Valentines Day

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by George Thompson

Reviewed on February 8, 2007

A butterfly really does symbolize freedom and you have captured that spirit very well in this poem.
George

Reviewed by Approximately Naive

Reviewed on February 8, 2007

When true love mounts up and reaches its zenith,it's height, and the width of its wingspan is beyond mere mortal comprehension. If by simply touching the tip of love's wing, we burn with passion,how much more it was wrapped around us?

Lovely thoughts to dwell on in this poem, C.J.
Dai

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on February 8, 2007

A Beautiful Metaphore...........
Delicate and wise...........
:)
pax Anita

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on February 8, 2007

CJ you're tenderness personified. Victor

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on February 8, 2007

Sensational in its soft touching beauty that the mind and heart must hear as quietly as a whisper when it is read, for that is how this one should be presented as a whisper of one's hearts wishes.

Fee

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury

Reviewed on February 8, 2007

What a delicate and beautiful comparison. Love is so gorgeous.

Reviewed by Guy Hogan

Reviewed on February 8, 2007

I like this very much. Like love, it makes me feel young again.

Reviewed by Karen Cino

Reviewed on February 8, 2007

I love this one. Especially this verse:
It reminded me of love.
If you find it,
hold it gently
to your heart.

What more can I say but that this is absoluley an awesome write.

Karen

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed on February 8, 2007

The wings of love have ever so lovingly, touched my heart, "...riding the wind peaceful and free" This is beautiful CJ!
Stand up and take a bow! Right now! Do it!
:)
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on February 8, 2007

The poet Rabindranth Tagore wrote : quote, " love me or kill me, but never abandone me in other's hands", unquote.
Love is like a delicate snowball, if the hands holding it are too tight or too warm... love will melt away between the fingers.
Happy to know that love treated you well.

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on February 8, 2007

Ooh CJ, this is an outstanding write, very sweet, warm, and romantic just the way love should be...while also sending a very wise message, if one finds this type of love, hold on tight...savour it...cherish, life is too short not to! Beautiful write my dear friend, simply beautiful!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Michelle Mills

Reviewed on February 8, 2007

Wow! Need I say more? Love, Michelle

Reviewed by Lynn Barry

Reviewed on February 8, 2007

Takes my breath away...you are amazingly versatile.

Reviewed by Rusty Daily

Reviewed on February 8, 2007

CJ, this softly written poem carries profound wisdom.
Hold me close
with open arms.
This line is astounding is its simplicity and complexity. Your poetic ability holds no master.
loveya
Rusty

Reviewed by Joyce Hale

Reviewed on February 8, 2007

Just beautiful, CJ!! Just beautiful....

Peace. Joyce

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on February 8, 2007

"Riding the wind, peaceful and free" Those are powerful words and call up many images. Great analogy to 'love'.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 8, 2007

If you find it,
hold it gently
to your heart.

Quite lovely, CJ.

Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)

Reviewed on February 8, 2007

A tender love so beautiful,Butterfly's are my favorite insect,Thanks for sharing this wonderful write!
Michael