i sit up in bed.....
skin wet from fever ....
i hear drums and chanting....
i open the window....
a rush of air comes in.....
the cat sits up on the bed.....
the drums are not outside....
they are inside my head.....
still heated and my mouth is dry....
i walk to the ice box and..
open the door
letting the cold air shiver my body....
i grab a bottle of water
hurrriedly drink it down....
i put it back and as i close the door....
i sense you are right behind me.....
in less than a thought....
your hands are there…
feeling like you are touching everywhere..
i feel mouth and teeth on my back and shoulders....
fingers playing every inch of my skin.....
the drums sounding louder...
the chanting more intense.....
my blood becomes lava....
my breath electric.....
fingers moving inside and out.....
I’m begging you now
i shreik as you enter....
i scream to the drums...
i breathe to the chanting....
i make love to the friction....
my hands are clawing the door....
magnets and photos go flying to the floor...
louder and faster the sounds in my head....
setting the pace we are in harmony with....
pounding and pushing.....
i see brilliant light....
and become unaware of the room ....
and with one final thrust.....
explosion of waves....
erupting volcano....
last gasp of breath....
joining as one....
the epiphany is done....
very nice write. you brought me to the edge, but didn't leave me hangin'. good flow. (howcome i never get this many readers?) must be my poem tiles.-steve
Wow!!! You sure know how to beat drums Debby...;-)
Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
Reviewed on May 10, 2002
somebody help me I'm a puddle on the floor and can't get up. WOW!!!! I hope you the drums you heard when you woke are real. they sure got my heart beating. Pant! Pant!
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I wrote this novel several years ago, I self published and never had it to sell. I have decided to rewrite it and hope to get it published within a few months for people to be able to buy. I had a few copies and gave them to a few family members and
very effective write
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TRASK
i'm going turn it in(LOL)
very very very good write he he