a slow song plays
we join the dance
how wonderful strong your arms
they hold me tight
against your form
i feel myself blend
to your curves
my arms on your neck
wiskers blushing my cheek
i don't want the song to end
intimate closeness as i
rhythm your thigh
slowly swaying side to side
whispers of love
embrace my ear
a chill crosses my neck
a sense of passion
envades my thoughts
my knees begin to weaken
your lips on my neck
strong hands at my hips
pulling me into you tighter
i swirl in the feeling
blending our hearts
i linger in the moment
wishing it will last forever
debby
*unchained melody* on the radio
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Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on May 16, 2002
I like the wording of this piece. I think if you sorted out the lines a bit, and made each verse four lines, it would have better phrasing to read. You have a wonderful wispy, dreamy quality to your work. I like it. Keep playing with the lines and you will have a winner. ~E
VERY NICE WRITE! sensual without being vulgar. you painted the picture in my mind. excellent flow.
(by the way "unchained melody" one of my favorites. wanna' dance?-steve
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(by the way "unchained melody" one of my favorites. wanna' dance?-steve
thanks for helping me to slow dance
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Neat Debby Your Friend TRASK
with willing steps
lady bends the sighs
well penned