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ascension of spirit
by Debby Rosenberg → (All Poetry by Debby Rosenberg)
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spring fever

 

 

 

silken whiskers upon cheeks caress

ancient eternity gazed in your eyes

the depths of grace amaze immense

I watch my joy that you dispense

 

upon my lashes is liquid bliss

ascension of spirit from your kiss

gift of  knowing your vision quest

I know I am extremely blessed

 

and these words feel so restrictive

the beauty of something felt

so intense

I am moved

 

personal connection

divinity

sensations tremble my being

expansive

 

to feel everything rhythmic

in motion pulsing

lingering exploring

this sensation greater than

momentum

 

squealing into deep

panting upon endure

nails upon the edge of

more, then more, and then more

 

I gasp for breath

and scream out loud

I see god behind your eyes

as you penetrate my being

with your love

 


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 Reviews of "ascension of spirit"
Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
Reviewed on December 7, 2010
Great texture oozes from every line of this poem. What a powerful expression of emotion and thought. I love the layering of verse upon verse, replete with palpable imagery and rhythm. Splendid writing.

Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi
Reviewed on October 29, 2010
Superb! A poem of sublime beauty and depth.

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on June 14, 2010
VERY VERY SENSUAL DEBBY..oH me ,oH my!!!!!!!M

Reviewed by Tony Jenkins
Reviewed on March 30, 2010
Please keep it up.

Take care Tony

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on March 30, 2010
Absolutely wonderful writing.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on March 28, 2010
So very beautiful . . .

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on March 28, 2010
This poem is essentially what has called me Home to AD today, Debby. I am melted and convicted by every word and yet it is the first two stanzas that completely move me in my inner being and rock me to the core. Your words here especially me make me see, know and understand that God does indeed dwell behind The Beloved's eyes. Thank you so much for this; I feel incredibly blessed by it. xx

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on March 27, 2010
That's what a man needs to hear to know he does be...a lover.

Georg


Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on March 26, 2010
beautiful as well as powerful write!

Reviewed by The Poetess
Reviewed on March 26, 2010

OK! I need a cold shower. :-)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 26, 2010
Completely mesmerizing and enchanting in depth and scope, Debby. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on March 26, 2010
Beautiful sentiments in this outstanding writing.


GOD BLESS YOU
Tony

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 26, 2010
Wow...........this is stunningly beautiful...love that line "I see god behind your eyes..." perfect phrase for this poem.
fee


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