within a cave cold and dark
retreating here to lick my wounds
nursing bruises i endured for you
i brought you love
i heard so what
i brought you light
i heard who cares
i brought affection
you turned away
it will take an effort to coax me out
and honey, you know i'm afraid of the dark
doesn't anyone bring
flowers anymore
while in here i look around
slide my hands along the wall
hoping i don't touch something icky
creepy, scary, or hideously ugly
a sound of water further back
passages low i crawl on fours
i find a fresh spring trickling
forming a small pool
gracious me this water's warm
perfect for my black and blue
i let the water kiss each one
and ponder why i'm here
perhaps the dark should be explored
for it's just a hardened wall of
granite and obsidian
knowing the sun moves across the sky
out of fire into earth
my paws will pad across this cave
perhaps i'll find a shining vein
of gold or crystalline
a lap of water, i lick my fangs
and sniff the ground
knowing your scent will lead me through
the darkness of this cave
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Reviews of "bruised"
Reviewed by aaaa aaa (Reader)
Reviewed on December 13, 2007
Primal.love it
Darlene
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on April 25, 2003
These two pieces go hand in hand. Exrta ordinary! They just fit because they JUST DO. Wow...Teresa
Wonderful poem. Just remember from the darkness comes the light. Great!!!
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on April 22, 2003
Debby,
{{HUGS}} thankyou
"i brought you love
i heard so what
i brought you light
i heard who cares
i brought affection
you turned away"
this is so beautiful Peggy
when we explore the darkness, things become very clear... great write!
Reviewed by Tyrone Banks (Reader)
Reviewed on April 22, 2003
I love the symbolism you have utilized and I found this work of art intriguing. My wish is that I can polish my craft and create the feeling you have created for your readers. Thank you for sharing!
Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on April 22, 2003
this was awesomely cool nice job on this fantastic dark and scary poem awesome job on it
The Butcher's Boy
- 2011 Readers Favorite Award Silver Medal Winner in Horror - Fiction
A Paranormal/Chiller by Michael Robb
Thirty-one years ago, Buxly the Butcher went to trial for killing h
Darlene
{{HUGS}} thankyou
"i brought you love
i heard so what
i brought you light
i heard who cares
i brought affection
you turned away"
this is so beautiful Peggy
Sandie Angel :o)