Victoria,
I like the soft feel of this poem. The imagery intensifies the intimacy within each line, because a walk along the beach seems to shut out the world. Well penned:)
Sheila
Vickie you redefine romantic verbiage -- "inside the flourishing essence, of gracility's caressive needs" -- passion that rolls off the tongue like melted butter -- may peace,love and joy guide your pen -- JMW
The answer to an extended palm - yes, oh, yes. Captured in a heart's song - yes, oh, yes. You have penned the very footprints that only the most passionate of lovers dare to tread. Yes, oh, yes! Thank you.
Promenades Stroll Vic, is such
a gift to read!
Thank YOU!
Love your heartstrings!
WRITE ON!
Warmest of Blessings, Love and Light, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo
...and we shall walk in sunshine and cloud, in clear skies and rain, in lands of plenty and arid desert but we shalll walk side by side in a promenade of two...
hugs Fee
After losing her boyfriend in a accident, Alecia believe she's been seeing him. But that can't possibly be? When Brayden reveals himself, or his soul, he asks her of a favor. But when that favor leads to her revealing feelings for her dead boyfriends
A story set in 10 years time where two bodies are found in the river NITH in Dumfries, south west Scotland. One is a blind musician and police informant while the other is Poppy, a young girl. It brings Mark and Carla together with different views i
I like the soft feel of this poem. The imagery intensifies the intimacy within each line, because a walk along the beach seems to shut out the world. Well penned:)
Sheila
You are not only a beautiful person. You write passion that never ends...with beauty...leaving us in envy.
Georg
Newfie Hugs, Rose
a gift to read!
Thank YOU!
Love your heartstrings!
WRITE ON!
Warmest of Blessings, Love and Light, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo
Passioned so extremely well . . . loved it!!
LOve and Hugs,
Lance
J'nia
hugs Fee
of romance, embracing "the soft luxuria of erotic esplanades."
-gene.
Mary