Elysian Arms Await (poem) by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse on AuthorsDen

Elysian Arms Await
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Bloopers! Bloopers!! Bloopers!! (Not the poem...BUT the recite...)
Elysian Arms Await Quietude evoking surrender; Fragile are those vulnerable emotions to carry you along… Rivers of delicate promise flowing; Guide me to ensouling faith of love… Ethers of passion reaching- Heart unbroken by belief- Wishes are cast into the pool of dreams; Flowing into memories of promises revealed… Journey upon the star of wisdoms speaking, tenderly within the ample visions of integrity… From the caressive shores of healing swell; Life is worth dancing footprints in the sands of time… Calling out the benevolence of your name to my soul; Melding upon a breeze of freedoms magnanimous message; Writing inescapable presence upon a new dawn rising… Walk within the dew drops upon the path of virtues noble meaning- Embrace the intrepidly cool essence of knowing deliberation… Clarity reaches into the entrusting eye of your soul; Chambered into a fortress of innate love… With ethereal significance; Freedom walks with the blinded heart of any man- Pressing to know the fortuned reasons of divinity; Hold steadfast your avowals devote passage- Pledging elysian arms await your fated arrival… (Written: August 18^th, 2009 2:44 p/m) In Joy, In Peace, In Grace, In Harmony of Love Embraced ~ Embrassé poétesse d'amour ~ poétesse romantique Copyright© 2009 Poetess Victoria L. McColley *http://stores.lulu.com/poetessvictoriamccolley* and here is the link to my unavailing attempts to recite “Elysian Arms Await” (somewhere in the middle….) http://www.AuthorsDen.com/adstorage/68762/blooper.wma

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on August 22, 2009

I sometimes get lost in the fertile forest of your prolific expressions... ...of course I mean that as a compliment dear Vickie. Love, hugs, peace, and my best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Jms Bell

...TAKING A CHANCE ON LOVE...ONCE AGAIN. WELL WRITTEN WITH THE MARVELOUS IMAGERY THAT ALWAYS DELIGHTS THIS READER. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)

lovely---- i wonder what it must be like to fall asleep in your arms as you softly read your poetry

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on August 21, 2009

I like the part about footprints in the sand. Life is worth it. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

VERY BEAUTIFUL, VERY ROMANTIC!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Ankin Timourian

Reviewed on August 20, 2009

Dear Victoria, one more beautiful poem, as always sounds like a fairy tale to me�
Full of new and interesting words for me to learn since English is my second language after Armenian and Russian. Thanks for sharing your talent. By the way I ordered your poetry book and can�t wait to get it. Love, always,

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Vicky,
"Life is worth dancing footprints in the sands of time..." for more than one reason I find that line very interesting, as indeed I find the whole poem, but that line stays and stays and I can't quite explain why.

John

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

You have �lan poetess and,
in my humble opinion, your words
read as brushstrokes.
Your love of language,
coupled with the aesthetic sensibilities of your corporeal
and spiritual insights, makes for poetic moments uniquely unsurpassed.
Listening to the poem read gives it a whole new dimension and your sense of humor made me laugh.
Blessings ...

Reviewed by Felix Perry

indeed...captivating from beginning to end my dear, well done.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by David cox (Reader)

Wishes are cast into the pool of dreams;

Flowing into memories of promises revealed�

Journey upon the star of wisdoms speaking,

tenderly within the ample visions of integrity�
what a great piece so dreamlike and i can picture this moment casting your wishes so expressive can i keep this part and use it one of cards i wil credit you as the author my cards.
i just love this piece .
love the poem and i especialy love the recite iit's true what you say some words are easy to write but very hard to say.
stay happy vickie.
Dave.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

"...chambered into a fortress of innate love..." Some are born to love, others to be loved and a few to write about it with sincerity...like you.

Georg

Reviewed by George Carroll

My eyes have trouble with this type of print but the poem is a beauty.

Reviewed by A PAX

beautiful reading.......so well done!! give yourself more credit lol