This poem is absolutely lovely! I especially enjoyed the last line, "She embraces the presence of you…the beatitude of your love…the purity"
Reviewed by David cox (Reader)
Reviewed on November 2, 2009
You sleep inside the chambers of her heart
like a beautiful dream
Surrounded within the soul
of love’s devotional promises
She embraces the presence
of you…the beatitude of your love…
the purity…
your words speak such beauty praissing the sensate nature of love.
drawing us into this amazing experience to share it with you.
Vickie,
This has the enchantment of a dream, as it should, and those images that tumble in our heads in that dream state and enrich the world before waking.
A Beautiful Dream is a marvelous poem that captures the essence, talent, heart, and soul, of Victoria L. McColley. It is breathtakingly romantic. After reading it I found myself fantasizing and living within the dream ... while simultaneously hoping I could savor the moment, forever.
Reginald V. Johnson, Author, How to be Happy, Successful, and Rich
I could never tire of your well crafted and mastery of words again you have out done yourself a magical mixture of reality and esoteric imagery a perfect marriage to reincarnate the soul... I am humblea
>>>and my heart goes pitter patter with the wonderful sweet innocent of this loving poem. Your dark writes were good Vick but your love poems are special indeed.
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fee
Erotic Interracial/ Reincarnation/ Suspense]
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Cheers,
Dan
like a beautiful dream
Surrounded within the soul
of love’s devotional promises
She embraces the presence
of you…the beatitude of your love…
the purity…
your words speak such beauty praissing the sensate nature of love.
drawing us into this amazing experience to share it with you.
exquisite Vickie
Christine
This has the enchantment of a dream, as it should, and those images that tumble in our heads in that dream state and enrich the world before waking.
John
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Reginald V. Johnson, Author, How to be Happy, Successful, and Rich
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fee