whirled into eddies of the wind
your mood eludes the intentions
where trust disappears into a sating veil
of your forbidden whispery secrecies
sheltered by unknown towering reasons
your breath caresses into the souls of questions
walking on the ripples of seductive emotions
your feelings intrude with sensual commitment
surging over the territory of intimate feelings
spiraling the hearts of desire with lusting thirst
igniting fieriness inside the hungry eyes of passion
your erotic moments erupt sexual edenic oblivion
where no man or woman would dare escape
through the provocative senses of love’s sybaritic touch
So romantic and mildly erotic, dear den sister. Your words made me smile. Has anyone ever told you that you write so beautifully? Your words intrigue the hearts of romantics all over the galaxy if not the universe. Thank you for sharing.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
Your Heart is such a TREASURE Vic!! ♥ I must have that book of yours too!!! ☺ YOU ROCK MY HEART and SOUL with all you easily share, and your words leave me breathless!!! ooxx Chat soon!
Again what lovely lines, Victoria...
walking on the ripples of seductive emotions.
-gene
Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on February 3, 2011
Victoria, Favorite lines, "your breath caresses
into the souls of questions" "spiraling the hearts
of desire with lusting thirst" Full of erotic visions
and alluring conutations. Well done!
Always,
Deborah
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
Love,
Christine
elegant, choice and meaningful.
John
Hugs, Diana..
fee
walking on the ripples of seductive emotions.
-gene
into the souls of questions" "spiraling the hearts
of desire with lusting thirst" Full of erotic visions
and alluring conutations. Well done!
Always,
Deborah
Love and Peace
Tony
Amor