Something hypnotic about it, and you packed so much in without going on and on. I also love the sounds. Repetition of shadows and the
"sh" echoing in perception. Nice use of sibilance, as well.
To me, you elicit mystery and mystical effects via your verses here, Vickie. I can "connect" to what you have expressed in ways hard to put into words. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes,
Conceptual inherence...inborn and natural existence...revered highly of a new age muse to have been cast as a statue in a private worship cubicle or garden...or erotic preludes of passion play...
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Zeke Milligan is stuck between a rock and a hard place. He is desperately in love with Lynn, but a dark secret from his past continues to rear its ugly head. Worse yet, he persistently punishes the love of his life for events that took p
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Something hypnotic about it, and you packed so much in without going on and on. I also love the sounds. Repetition of shadows and the
"sh" echoing in perception. Nice use of sibilance, as well.
B r a v a !!
xOx Phyllis xOx
Rose
Regis
In adoration and metaphysical ties,
Sage