You have definition and meaning
You make everything right from A to Z
You are fill with verbs
Everything you do is an action of love
You are fill with adjectives
Everything you stand for describes your character
Your love is plural
You show it in many ways
From your kisses to the times we spend together
You define sugar because you are a sweetheart
You define gold because you are solid with 24 karats of strength
You define art because you are simply a masterpiece that I cherish every single day of my life
You define mornings because you are my sunshine
You define nights because you are my star
Copyright(c)2009 Edwin Hurdle
Thanks Edwin
Hugs to you,
CJ
You can bet you are her sunshine. Shining star!!
Write...and Love...ON,
xOx 'Pea' xOx
You've captured the meaning of genuine love. The imagery is excellent, and the emotions written from the heart. May you capture your every dream.
Wishes for a lifetime of love and happiness,
Sherri
excellent write,
Pierre
I could not live without the dictionary
I can find everything From A-Z
Brilliant write!!
Wishing you Peace Love and Light....Yolie
Blessings, Lin
I liked the ideas in your poem Dictionary
Joe
Ron
Mutiple Blessings, JMD
Hi Edwin,
What a sweet poem to write about a person that you truly love. I hope this loved one had a chance to read it.
I know I enjoyed reading it very much. If my husband would write a poem like this one, I would truly appreciate it, but for some reason he just doesn't write stories or poems. I guess it is because he thinks he can't.
Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year,
Patty
Words of true emotion
Enjoyed - thanks for sharing.
Doug
A clever insight into
the heart of a poet
Blessings ...
r
Most enjoyable reading
Thanks for sharing
Peace be with you
William
Well, maybe? I love your take on the one and only thing that we all hold dear as poets...
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
All the best,
lena
excelent done!!
i especially love this part "You define sugar because you are a sweetheart"
keep up the great work!!
God bless you. Kathy
Regis
Love & Light,
Joseph
Be always safe,
Karen
How eloquently and romantically said, this is wonderful. And for me the final two lines are just perfect. Yes!
John
I really enjoyed this expression Edwin...
Read on My Friend!!
Write On Too...
Peace, Love & Inspirations
Vickie
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Be encouraged Edwin, and may the Lord always bless and keep you!
Much Love!
Always!!
Georg
Love,
Sage