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No Idea What He’d Done!
by Bonnie Lou May → (All Poetry by Bonnie Lou May)
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Young love is a beautiful thing and a memory that lies within our hearts forever. Many pitfalls await and some never make it. But it remains beautiful nevertheless.


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No Idea What He’d Done!
 
On his eighteenth birthday, Ed decided he didn’t want a fuss,
So he got up real early and boarded a greyhound bus.
Getting off in a nearby town, he headed for the theater.
He was meeting a friend there, and nothing could be sweeter.
 
For his friend was Jasmine, hearing her name made his heart sing.
He has loved Jasmine for many years, even gave her a friendship ring.
They mutually met as small children in a park where they resided.
They had tender hearts; both enjoyed each other and both were delighted.
 
Jasmine’s parents quickly moved away and his heart almost broke.
He couldn’t see his life without her; it was one of life’s cruel jokes.
He eventually found out that Jasmine didn’t move all that far.
In fact, he could be there in nearly two hours, if he had a car.
 
He was shortly getting his car and next week they made plans.
He was taking her to dinner after that off to see her favorite bands.
Each of them was so excited and they could hardly wait.
That’s why they were meeting today to get there stories straight.
 
You see, Jasmine wasn’t allowed to date especially someone like Ed.
His mother was a well-known prostitute and Ed’s real father was dead.
Her parents forbid her to see Ed again, but her heart kept saying no.
So off she went to meet her Ed, at the nearest picture show.
 
The weekend finally came and Ed was driving to get his love.
When the accident happened, it was quick like lightning from above.
Ed was killed instantly and next to his body laid a beautiful pearl ring.
It was a gift for Jasmine, a pledge to her and what that pledge will bring.
 
Jasmine arrived early and waited patiently for hours on end,
She knew something must have happened, this wasn’t like her friend.
She loved Ed with all her heart and she has since she was small.
He brought excitement and joy to her life, in fact, he brought it all.
 
She heard the news late that night about a young man in a crash.
She knew instantly it was Ed and flew to her bedroom in a dismal dash.
She was just about to cut her wrist when she felt a gentle touch.
She knew it was Ed caressing her, for she loved him so much.
 
He whispered softly in her ear, my darling, live your life for me.
For someday in the future we’ll be together, I promise you will see.
My short life has ended needlessly, but yours has just begun.
So my darling, live for me and make it one passionate run.
 
She was so determined to do everything Ed had said.
He was the last thing she thought of, when she went to bed.
Her parents still disliked him even after they knew he was gone.
They never knew he saved Jasmine’s life, had no idea what he’d done.
 
Written by,
Bonnie May
 
 
 
 

 

 


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 Reviews of "No Idea What He’d Done!"
Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on September 21, 2008
Like Edmatlack said,all of us Eds are indeed pretty special guys.This is the most heartfelt poem that you have written.The power of love is so precious and strong.In this life,none of us is promise tomorrow,but we have to live for the moment right now.I think its stupid that her parents didn't approve of him because if they would just open up their minds then they can truly see that he was indeed a rare and special human being.If Ed was alive today,he would still treat her with such unconditional love for which he had already shown.I love this poem.It touch me in a way.take care of yourself

Edwin

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on September 21, 2008
Cool write, all us Ed's are pretty special guys...;-) ed

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 21, 2008
Oh this is a beautiful yet very sad story/poem...that kinda love can carry you through dark times I am sure!! Almost like Arc-angel Michael...keeping a watchful eye over Jasmine!!

My hubby's name is also Michael...but I call him "the devil" OH YEAH!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on September 21, 2008
What a wonderful write, Bonnie!!! This one moves me deeply!!!
Ed has now becomes Jasmine's guardian angel, and he will always be by his side.

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed on September 21, 2008
Wonderful sentiments depicted here. God knows what good hearts do

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on September 21, 2008
Great thinking again and reading it was a treasure. Sad though it is he was write, she needs to go on living and some day she will be with him in paradise. So true a write and amazlingly happens to to many people in life.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on September 21, 2008
Bonnie, this is one beautifully written poem/story, I am weeping as I write this. You certainly know how to touch people's hearts.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on September 21, 2008
You see my little Bonnie? we Eds are a good lot!
Can you write a short story about it, there is a lot that you can say for her and for him that can fill the heart of those parents.

Georg

Reviewed on September 21, 2008
Heartbreaking story within these lines, Bonnie; very well penned! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(


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