When Words Don’t Flow (poem) by Bonnie Lou May on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on February 4, 2009

Poetry shows others a piece of your heart.
Cryssa

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on February 1, 2009

Bonnie this is beautiful, it reminds me of something I was talking about today, when I went to the store after church and taking my niece home about the magic that can be made with just a piece of paper and a pen.
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)

Reviewed on February 1, 2009

Sometimes the brain takes a vacation.. with all the wonderful writings you post, your brain is probably very tired. LOL

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on January 31, 2009

and that is what makes writing so special--love this write!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on January 31, 2009

True enough...ed

Reviewed by Stephanie Murray (Reader)

Reviewed on January 31, 2009

I can relate. Thanks for sharing.

Stephanie

Reviewed by Carin Spirit

Reviewed on January 31, 2009

Thank you for this one my friend. warmth and love with your granddaughter in mind. ~ Carin'

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on January 31, 2009

Bonnie~!

Extraordinary thought and inspiration in your words - fantastic!!

LOve and Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 31, 2009

the words are in there somewhere

And it's truly wondrous, when they flow.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 31, 2009

All sorts of possibilities can be used on that blank piece of paper. Drawings. Mathematical figures. Stories/poems. Journals. Anything! Good write, Bonnie, and somehow I doubt you could ever get writer's block, the way you write! LOL Very well done as always, Bonnie; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. ;D

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce

Reviewed on January 31, 2009

We all get into writers block at one time or another; but Bonnie, you will never be lost for words, for you write them from your heart and the words just flow out.

Many of us write from our hearts too!!!

Take care.

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by John Coppolella

Reviewed on January 31, 2009

Wonderful --- inspirational --- Soothing. Thanks, Bonnie.

Reviewed by Connie Faust

Reviewed on January 31, 2009

I can't imagine the words not flowing for you, dear Sis. You are like a waterfall of poetry, rushing in a great crescendo of rhyme to the bubbling finale in the river below.
Hugs, Connie

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 31, 2009

As poets and writers one of our fears I believe is that our muse will desert us and leave our minds stranded on a dead end road that by passes our imagination. Great write Bonnie.

Fee

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on January 31, 2009

Beautiful thoughts that reflect the challenges of a wrtier

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)

Reviewed on January 31, 2009

Beautiful, the way this flows with a meter that brings the reader right along, riding on the train of your thought (geez, that's a pretty neat image!). Isn't it wonderful -- when you have a first line, the rest of the poem writes itself. No need to force anything. It's like the poem was waiting in your mind and heart, just waiting to spill out onto paper or word processor. I love it, and you have described the process perfectly :-)

Ted

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on January 31, 2009

Good morning Bonnie.You truly captured the essence of what a writer feels whenever he or she tries to write a poem,or a song,or a novel.Sometimes I do have trouble finding the words to my poem,but whenever I would write a poem or a song,it always makes me feel good.Poetry is in everybody's DNA.Its a part of who we are as individuals.Writing a poem or a song is the most rewarding feeling in the world.I enjoy reading your works,but most of all I enjoy what you have displayed in the Den with your heart and spirit that shines through your poems like the sun with a whole lot of brightness,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on January 31, 2009

White pages sometimes talk about a writer's block, other times of the writer's wishes to not spoil the purity of the paper with words.
"...when I put my pen to paper I never know...!
De-licious!

Georg