Handling business.......
......um....gotta make that money
With 4 eyes on the prize.......
.....I wanta be drowned in honey
We sleep in shifts......
.....when I'm open your closed
See how long we can pass each
Other on our way thur life and remain happy
(not long)....
...... Oh the games we play to pave
The way "leap frog" no no"musical chairs"
(before 1's gone)
When we are together......
........On Sunday mornings
Rare as it is.........
....... When the day is stormin'
I'm thinking of the women down
By the harbor and shes thinking of the kids......
.....I no were only dreaming together so few spoken
Words our dreams unheard uncertain sealed lips
Shush.......
.......the actress is entering the room
Just pretend to watch the tv.......
.......my script in full bloom
And when she gets outta the bathroom.......
.......misty filled air and window fogged dread
And it's your turn to cry.......
....... wondering question marks circling in head
Run the water this time
Cause your making us look bad..........
........remember to run the water this time
cause your making us look bad
written by JR and Me
Hay Sandie how you like it now -smile-!!!!!!!!
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Reviews of "Note To Self (couple's unspoken dialogue)"
Reviewed by Lisa Cannons (Reader)
Reviewed on April 22, 2002
Congrats M & JR! fantastic write guys
Lisa
Reviewed by John Reilly (Reader)
Reviewed on April 21, 2002
Hey all I cannot accept any credit for this it was all Mitzi putting her unique spin on a plain idea she dressed it up and took it to the prom good work hun good job
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on April 20, 2002
This is different, I enjoyed......Ron
Reviewed by mitzi jackson
Reviewed on April 20, 2002
Sandie
i was joking and I'm sorry if i hurt your feelings, i think you are a very, very sweet person and I enjoy your poetry, i guess i took for granted that you really don't know me and there was know way for you to know that i was just kidding, you sent me a very nice message and you also saved my poem (pedals)if anyone don't know i welcome comments and i really want honesty don't give me a ten if that's not what your feeling you made my day today and I hope I didn't ruin yours
you are appreciate
Reviewed by Gregory Sonn (Reader)
Reviewed on April 20, 2002
Well done guys. Sandie is only learning, what happens when she gets educated?LOOK OUT!
Gregg
It does looks better this time.......but hey I'm only learning poetry. I'm everyone's student here; but once in a while I voice my honest humble opinion, be it a sound one or not.
I'm sorry everyone, today hasn't been really a good day for me to do anything. Perhaps tomorrow I will feel better.
Grab those side-irons, saddle up and join former Civil War sharpshooter Luther Henry for a ride into pure terror, western-style…think ‘Wild Wild West’ meets ‘The X-Files’.
Pray for the light. Pray that you last that long. The Long Hour Before Light is a classic collection of Horror tales, re-mastered by Champagne Book Group
Lisa
i was joking and I'm sorry if i hurt your feelings, i think you are a very, very sweet person and I enjoy your poetry, i guess i took for granted that you really don't know me and there was know way for you to know that i was just kidding, you sent me a very nice message and you also saved my poem (pedals)if anyone don't know i welcome comments and i really want honesty don't give me a ten if that's not what your feeling you made my day today and I hope I didn't ruin yours
you are appreciate
Gregg
Thanks for the collaboration, JR and MKJ--both versions excellently written. And, still just as poignant...
It does looks better this time.......but hey I'm only learning poetry. I'm everyone's student here; but once in a while I voice my honest humble opinion, be it a sound one or not.
I'm sorry everyone, today hasn't been really a good day for me to do anything. Perhaps tomorrow I will feel better.
Thanks Mitzi and John, for this re-write!
Your poet friend,
Sandie Angel :o)