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Sweet
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*you say to me
nobody can fuck you like i do
nobody can fill you like me
so cut it out and wait
you damn fool









Poem Artwork

I gave birth to fire

Ingest it into my being

I filled myself with it

You could never seen

I consumed it carried it in my womb

I bathe in it

Babies and fools

I burp it out blazing tubes

Voice crackled out of tune

While you do what you do

I lay open for it

Lips bursting

Crying out drowning

Quivering thighs

I sigh

Arching breast pointing toward heaven

I remember it oh so well

Your swell

Tipping through walls

Smoldering themselves

I carried it now full so full

And you are away

You could have never seen

Naked to this world

More than first breath

Exposed

You feed it to me

And moderation was a four letter word

Devour

Was on my plate

I ate

Nine months (really four)

I birth it out

Insides burning

Splitting

Open I birth it out

Crying yelling

Sweating

Nothing like consumption

Conception

I remember how sweet it was

Nobody can f*** you like me

And my skin sings until she bleeds

With laughter

Now your there and I’m here

Raising hell

Your child

our love child

remembering how sweet it was

 
 


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 Reviews of "Sweet"
Reviewed on April 18, 2007
Great sentiments in this poem. mature images captured here

Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi
Reviewed on April 17, 2007
Just impressive. So acid-bitter. So rose-nectar sweet. Love gone seems like life wasted but I feel it is not.

Reviewed by George Thompson
Reviewed on April 17, 2007
You pull no punches on this carpet ride of raging crimson and you don't let up until the last pant has been exhausted.

George

Reviewed by Aberjhani
Reviewed on April 14, 2007
A very hot slice of womanist poetry served rich with compelling perspectives rooted in down-to-earth real-time truth and emotion.
Aberjhani

Reviewed by Rose Loya
Reviewed on April 13, 2007
Really like this Mitzi, you cut to the quick.

xoxo, Rose

Reviewed by Tristen Voleur (Reader)
Reviewed on April 12, 2007
Powerful poem!

Reviewed by K. Mulroney
Reviewed on April 11, 2007
what was, what isn't now. What should have been leads to now. You wrote all life right here. You are one of my favorites!

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell
Reviewed on April 11, 2007
Whoa...lots of power to wake up to this morning.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on April 10, 2007
Enticed, enthralled, excited. I couldn't get to the next line fast enough. I enjoyed. Liz

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on April 8, 2007
Sweet, Mitzi...it happens...we move on and quill it for poetry...what else can we do...An artistic poem well represented here...the rawness swells with emotion and releases cultural tears welled up deep inside the womb...treat us again to this style of poem...Blessed Be.

Sage

Reviewed by Jerry Engler
Reviewed on April 8, 2007
Burning description of a part of the human condition poignantly rooted in personal experience. Especially liked the line,"and my skin sings until she bleeds."...Jerry

Reviewed on April 8, 2007
MOtherbirth and his Miracle!
Your Miracle1
What a Blessed Poem!
Thank you for sharing your Heart and Soul it Mitzi!
WArmly,Warrior Lady Sheeeoox
Enjoy! YOur Easter Celebrations!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on April 7, 2007
Powerful Mitzi
He got ya good did he....

Reviewed on April 7, 2007

"Sweet"
Provocatively shocking and yet a sustained beauty throughout its entirity!

"You feed it to me
And moderation was a four letter word"
Mitzi let it be said that you stayed on point.

Love nad enlightenment as always have a blessed holiday.
Continued inspirations,
~Gwendolyn




Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 7, 2007
I think we should get a rope and find this dude.

I compliment you on the rawness of this work, and from beginning to end, it is superb.

Elizabeth

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 7, 2007
Oh dear girl how I feel this!!

Sighh Happy Easter anyways!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on April 7, 2007
this gets right into the pleasure and the pain of it

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 7, 2007
All of the pain and the glory....

Ron

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on April 6, 2007
Sounds like he don't f'ing well care. Never understood blokes who don't love and want to nurture the fruit of their loins. I'm on the opposite pole, fighting just to see my lad... Rant on, purge it all...

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 6, 2007
I know I should not "say" this; but, respectfully; I know how you feel. I feel the same way and on the same theme, Mitzi. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Stan Grimes (Reader)
Reviewed on April 6, 2007
Fantastic write, Mitzi. You have said a great deal...many emotions are evoked. Loved it.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on April 6, 2007
nice lyrical and human work, as always, the visuals woven by your words are incredible

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on April 6, 2007
An intense display of emotions and sensuality combining into love and passions of life....

nice work.....Art Sun...

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 6, 2007
Takes my breath away, this poem is hot, sensual, angry, hopeful, resentful am I forgetting an adjective,,,ph yes loving as it goes full circle from desire to birth and back to desire again. Great write Mitzi, very well thought out.

Fee

Reviewed on April 6, 2007
Mitzi,

Another amazing write with outstanding lines; well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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