I close my eyes
and your name floats out of my lips
and stay suspended in the air
you fall through your name
deep into my ocean
my forest parts to you
I remember the rumbling
the touching, the caressing
the removing of lost tired thoughts
I remember the pauses between
the rights and the wrongs
the laws that should never
had been broken
and my nectar seeps through/into
your music box
that you bury deep inside
and I can't think
I want to say no to you
I want to think everything will be ok
that it is not to late to save face
then a moist wave of warmth explodes and
I pull you deeper inside of me
my gel consumes our air our mouths
your thick massive my smooth submissive
blend inside and twist
and I'm floating I'm lost
somewhere inside of your world
I lost the fight
I lost the will
I lost the might....you won
and I am inside of you
somewhere inside of your world
so much of my control
is in the rhythm of your body
I bend I rise I open I roll...all to you
I close my eyes
floating somewhere in red and blue skies
laid out for all of you to see
now you have me panting
now you have me crying
my body aches to be filled
...taking your time you spread my limbs
and Oh my God the things you do with each hit
you cover the arch in my back
pulling my head back to meet your lips
sweet juices mix and Ow...........
the poetry of your breath
tells me never before
tells me you will/do/have already regreted sliding inside of me
too late I cry!!! too late you shout!!!
inside of moans and cries
inside of our real lives
inside of tormenting goodbyes
Never you whisper
Never is what I wanted to hear
knowing the impossible
I like sensual/erotic verse when it is well done...and this is well done. The rhythm and imagery of this blends so well with the passions and emotions...and in there, is a soft, bittersweet flavor...very well done, Mitzi
Reviewed by RON P KING
Reviewed on May 19, 2003
ON THAT NOTE I GUESS I WILL GO TO WORK AND WEAR 2 TO 3 APRONS.GOOD!
you and reilly in the same day.
i fairly swoon welcome home sweety and what a welcome post this is, whereever you've been whatever you've been doing, your work has flourished.
josie
Mitzi wherever you have been, I'm sure glad to see you back! You are sure to wake up this den of sleeping lions and have them shouting for more when they read this;-)WElcome back!
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Some great reading....Thanks!
i fairly swoon welcome home sweety and what a welcome post this is, whereever you've been whatever you've been doing, your work has flourished.
josie
WE missed your wonderful poetry a lot!!!!
Good to read you again