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To Teach People to See Without a Camera -- Smaller Print {to preserve fmt}
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I did a version in a larger font, so
if you're having trouble reading this,
check it out. It appears next on the list of poems. There is also a brief introduction that I would love for you to read. T h a n k s! {N: only made the print this small because that AD book ad robs so much space that it
messes with formatting. ~~ scowl ~~}


Poem Artwork

               To Teach People to see Without a Camera
               Photographer Dorothea Lange {1895-1965}
                               
click-cli–. . .wait.   Do I hate flash more than I love to be surprised?
Pulling my leg (okay to say leg, relax).   Like I can give up seeing
things I miss develop.  Eyes abruptly gloss.  Shrug or twitch
gives the lie or a flat-lined grin stands, brushes itself off,
and shouts, I'm aliiiiiiiiive.  Here, cheek bones leap and arc
like shark-spooked fish.  See too much hunger, God.   Yet
frolics frolic.   A child who lost her only doll – made of rags,
of course – along with the home she knew,  to raging whirling
dust wags her tongue.  Jigging sis winks mid-twirl, blushing
to her rag-curled locks.  15-year-old partner flushes and ducks,
dirty yellow cowlick tattling, I am yours, I am yours!   Look.  
at the woman raise her fiddle over her head.  Doesn't miss
a beat.   Toothpick arms sad.  On, and here a man tips a moth-
hatchery hat, revealing a bowling-ball pate.   But the hands
that reach to help and the Huck Finn grins that poke fun
at odds,  I  live to see.    Now back to the issue of flash. 
 I understand poets have to swallow its use.  Say a  beginning
begs for more light.  Always stash the gun when sun streams.
Natural!  Natural!   Flat gotta have it.
 
flash click   1519:  Leonardo da Vinci draws a camera..  See?
he crows.  Just takes a light-proof chamber and punch a tiny hole
to let in light, get a reverse copy of what's opposite.  Radical!
 
flash click   l8th century dude goes by de la Roche  spins
a tale in which mystery-goo'd canvas captures image,
albeit in reverse.  Dry in the dark to keep.  Voila!
 
Clunky Graphlex borrowed.   Got to hop between assignments.
"Hop?"    Here to tell you,  the after-effects of polio are nothing
against having seen storms destroy the house and farm
that muscles you never knew you had and a wife worth her weight
in gold dug, hoed, and cursed into yielding.  How many prayers
can a person pray?  Hell seeing silk-suits strut away to count
your lost living.  Or say you heaved, toted, and dragged
whatever needed heaving and toting and dragging to keep
your family alive.  Off the blasted dole.  Then sharks zero
in on blood on the dock.  Snap!   Fat's sucked, union's a farce.
Some of you got robbed by other means.  Bureaucrats divided up
your house and ran over your garden, all the while besmirching
your name.  Prodded you and your family like cattle behind
barbed wire states away.   All because you have Japanese blood.
Having seen her work, the feds enticed Dorothea to document.
Knew without knowing she would make others see.  The polio
that had felled her as a child and seeing her father walk off
had left her sensitive.   Lonely and pegged Different, Lange
had sped and steeled her stride on the streets of Manhattan
from the age of  twelve.  Among her lucky breaks, the marvels
spread before her.  Weaving and re-weaving threads
of an unbelievable tapestry,  raveled and dirty but rich
in color, and with an exotic background.   So many  
countries represented.  So many stories in the passing
faces.   Heady mix.  But so many people were in rags.  
So thin, they made Dorothea wince.
 Yes, and dream
of one day finding a way to make others see.
 
"How did I get started?   Scut-work, my dear.  I toted, I hopped
to the deli, I made the cold calls.  Eyes open, ears tuned.   Great
teachers helped. In time, I had the good luck to find a mate sees
as I.  Cross America together, beseeching survivors to tell their side.
Seeing and hearing and feeling help us swim beyond physical
mental, and emotional limps.   Straighten up, cough up
the bottom sand, sieve out most of the weeds, and create gifts.
Me, I start with light and shadow.   See?"
 
Hot  in California, ain' it?   Look over there.   Our gal's on top
that boxy car.  Camera to eye,   Worn shorts, lots of pockets,
thrown-on shirt. . .boots made for walkin', yeah.     
click cli--

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c) Phyllis Jean Green,  May, 2006  __ ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
 
   

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 Reviews of "To Teach People to See Without a Camera -- Smaller Print {to preserve fmt}"
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on June 7, 2006
As others have said, your pages ALWAYS reward and surprise, totally delighting the passing tourist with a Nikon!! KEEP being you, keep seeing everything with those fresh eyes that awaken heart and soul and that know how to TOUCH the world and transfer the feeling into the limp and conditioned minds of the rest of us. You are SOOOOOOOOO refreshing, Phyllis, thank you. LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by Barbara Terry
Reviewed on June 5, 2006
Sage and everyone here has said everything well. There is nothing I can add, except to say that I am in awe of your great talent Pea. This work is a marvel of the woman who did much to document much for posterity. Thanx sis for sharing this wonderful tribute to a wonderful woman.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie

"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 27, 2006
You are a source of learning, Pea. Thank you for sharing your insights and your knowledge. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on May 23, 2006
Phyllis you have such a unique voice and so your work means a break in the monotony of mediocrity for readers. You always give a fresh view with a new ear. An enlightening read here. :-) ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Walker Jackson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2006
Well, the print was small until I clicked view and selected largest print. Quite informative my lady.

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on May 23, 2006
To document the American and foreign flags that fly high with all peoples under them...one has to first see with the mind's eye! Ask what it is that they want to capture on film to share with the world. These images are not hard to find...they're everywhere, always have been...I see that shocking and crowd-pleasing photography right here on the Den...a veteran in a wheelchair, the only one in a crowd of the masses standing up, the rest all sitting...the children on crutches and in wheelchairs, the photo of the soldier in Iraq that was growing his patch of grass sent to him by family, outside his tent, that one you posted, Pea...all of these are award-winning images and they forever have an impact on us! Norman Rockwell has this effect on me...he painted those homey images from reality and still today, we admire family life and simpleness of his work! The one he did of Henry Ford's new car driving down the street and children and adults looking out of their house windows in astonishment will forever hold a place in my mind and the one he did with the woman draped over the chair eating Baxter's chocolates and a scotty dog watching holds such a sweet memory for me as does the soda fountain one! Thanks for this poem, Pea. It is truly an original.

Sage

Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on May 23, 2006
Fascinating, Pea...thank you for enlightening me...hadn't heard of Ms Lange until now...you do such an excellent generous educational deed with your writings!

Gina

Reviewed on May 23, 2006
Pea,

An excellent image you've presented in dynamic verse; one sees the poem and enters the picture. Well done, my friend, a masterwork!

(((((HUGS))))) and love, Karla.

Had to adjust text size, me eyes don't work so good anymore. :) Still and all, BRILLIANCE~

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on May 23, 2006
"Seeing and hearing and feeling help us swim beyond
physical mental and emotional limps" Great line!!
This is an excellent piece Pea!

Reviewed on May 23, 2006
=*=*=* IF WE DON’T HAIL ZEUS JUSTICE WILL PREVAIL.*=*=*=

ON THIS TUESDAY, (TIUS’ DAY) DEDICATED TO MARS, BY THE ROMAN-GREEK EMPIRE, CELEBRATED IN EVERY PROVINCE OF IT$ $PIRITUAL REALM$, –
I salute You, Poet Phyllis Jean Dawson Green!

Salutations and Benisons.

"To Teach People to See Without a Camera" brings a rainbow of colors to the pages of history. It is poetic accomplishment to enrich the memory of our time.

Health, Creativity, Wisdom and Prosperity.

In gratitude,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 22, 2006
will be right back ... had to get the ol! magifying glass ....

Reviewed by Aberjhani
Reviewed on May 22, 2006
Definitely worth squinting a little to get the full frame of every line:-) Whereas Lange clicked a camera to create marvels, apparently some poets named Phyllis Jean Green click syllables, nuance, and heated biographical detailed moments of creativity in action to produce the same. Exceptional work produced by service to an exceptional vision of what art can and perhaps should be.
Aberjhani

Reviewed on May 22, 2006
Ah MIZ Pea you have outdone yourself on this one. Click I want to be a poet like you when I grow up. Fantastic! Mikii <1937-

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 22, 2006
Unique write Pea and the camera angle is fresh looking at history to find our way back to the present. Great job.

felix

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on May 22, 2006
Pea
You comprise and compact beautifully and exquisitely in this latest
extraordinary addition to your epic Art Series...
Dorothea Lange was a Californain photographer par excellence who documented the changes in America , especially among ethnic groups and workers uprooted by the war.
You are on an incredible roll Pea !!
Love and Peace
Peter


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