Wind is whipping autumn into submitting to its will. Has clouds scuttling long held plans and trees bowing too low to be safe. Leaves that are brittle from weeks without rain and thin as onionskin from being pounded by the deluge that followed, fall as if driven like cattle to the slaughter. At first, they fell by ones. Had the leisure of drifting and reaching out to touch and try to turn bad luck to philosophy complete with clowning while being herded. But now, but now, the air is dark with bodies exploded from limbs and twigs. And yet always a smattering holds on. A fire-topped oak here, a bronze-cloaked maple there, a belated fireworks display of unknown origin that is such a brilliant orange, one peers from under lowered lids as if it were an eclipse. Bless those who go against the tide, no matter what. Hold on by your teeth for your Moment.
Wow! YOur style of writing is so Unique and catchy
I will be watchin'
This is a Keeper1
OFf to the Vault it goesssssssss!
Thank you Phill... for sharing!
No kiddin' Bless those who go against...........
The STrong and mighty!
Love those lines you ended with!
Happy Healthy ThanksGiving DAy to you and yours!
Warm HuGs,Sheee
ADORE THIS!! The title alone just "does it" for me, somehow! So well-crafted to attain its crescendo and the concluding lines are to die for! A total "MWAH" moment, thank you! LOL K xx
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on November 16, 2006
Your style is unique..really appreciated this piece..thankyou..
Vesna:)
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on November 16, 2006
You use your words in a wonderful manner and ended this poem with a great twist from the usual descirptions. Victor
I always come away alive and vital from your most illustrious Den,....and you never fail to give undoubted hope and inspiration to your adoring and incredible readership..
Never stop doing.... what you do do well, my dear friend..
Love and Peace
Peter
PS
I am still enjoying my hiatus from the Den,... but rest assured I am popping in now and then.... to read all your scintillating works,.... and bless you sweet pea for your stop at my Den, and your most comforting words..
You can be assured that you and yours are in my thoughts and prayers..
Reviewed by S J (Reader)
Reviewed on November 13, 2006
This is a premium piece, Phyllis!
I love the title of your poem... "Skin, if you Have To".
"Bless those who go against the tide,
no matter what.
Hold on by your teeth
for your Moment"
I love the metaphor for going against the grain, and the imagry of clouds scutting their plans, bronze cloaks and trees bowing too low to be safe. This is one of your best, I think
Autumn~ "Skin, if you Have To..." An interesting and Creative topic to a well written display, of imagery and emotion!
Wonderful, Phyllis!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy
Your kinship with nature is made most evident via your verses, Pea. I truly respect and appreciate this as I am a total nature lover. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,
I will be watchin'
This is a Keeper1
OFf to the Vault it goesssssssss!
Thank you Phill... for sharing!
No kiddin' Bless those who go against...........
The STrong and mighty!
Love those lines you ended with!
Happy Healthy ThanksGiving DAy to you and yours!
Warm HuGs,Sheee
Love,
CJ
Light & Love,
Joselyn
Vesna:)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
no matter what.
Hold on by your teeth
for your Moment.
Well said, Pod
Thank you for sharing it,
Steve
""those who go against the tide,
no matter what" ... the crux of this powerful poem ...
Blessings,
JOyce Bowling
and your words!!!
make this an experience
just beautiful!!!
I always come away alive and vital from your most illustrious Den,....and you never fail to give undoubted hope and inspiration to your adoring and incredible readership..
Never stop doing.... what you do do well, my dear friend..
Love and Peace
Peter
PS
I am still enjoying my hiatus from the Den,... but rest assured I am popping in now and then.... to read all your scintillating works,.... and bless you sweet pea for your stop at my Den, and your most comforting words..
You can be assured that you and yours are in my thoughts and prayers..
I love the title of your poem... "Skin, if you Have To".
"Bless those who go against the tide,
no matter what.
Hold on by your teeth
for your Moment"
Excellent writing!
Thank you,
Sheila
Carmen
Paul;-)
Peace and Love
Tinka
peace and love, Carole
Wonderful, Phyllis!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy
no matter what.
Hold on by your teeth
for your Moment.
Love your ending, Phyllis!
Fee
Regis
A joy to read!...ET