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Skin, if you Have To
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Wind is whipping autumn into submitting
to its will.   Has clouds scuttling
long held plans and trees bowing
too low to be safe.   Leaves
that are brittle from weeks without rain
and thin as onionskin
from being pounded
by the deluge that followed,
fall as if driven like cattle
to the slaughter.  At first,
they fell by ones.  Had the leisure
of drifting and reaching out
to touch and try to turn
bad luck  to philosophy
complete with clowning while being
herded.  But now, but now,
the air is dark
with bodies exploded from limbs
and twigs.  And yet always
a smattering holds on.
A fire-topped oak here,
a bronze-cloaked maple there,
a belated fireworks display of unknown
origin that is such a brilliant orange,
one peers from under lowered  lids
as if it were an eclipse.
Bless those who go against the tide,
no matter what. 
Hold on by your teeth
for your Moment.
 

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 Reviews of "Skin, if you Have To"
Reviewed on November 19, 2006
Wow! YOur style of writing is so Unique and catchy
I will be watchin'
This is a Keeper1
OFf to the Vault it goesssssssss!
Thank you Phill... for sharing!
No kiddin' Bless those who go against...........
The STrong and mighty!
Love those lines you ended with!
Happy Healthy ThanksGiving DAy to you and yours!
Warm HuGs,Sheee


Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on November 19, 2006
This is wonderful, Pea! I agree with Karen, those last four lines are dynamite -- a splendid ending to a well-written poem.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on November 19, 2006
The final 4 lines got me-i love your writing

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on November 18, 2006
I have saved this one. I love the way you wove this masterful poem....
Light & Love,
Joselyn

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on November 17, 2006
ADORE THIS!! The title alone just "does it" for me, somehow! So well-crafted to attain its crescendo and the concluding lines are to die for! A total "MWAH" moment, thank you! LOL K xx

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on November 16, 2006
Your style is unique..really appreciated this piece..thankyou..

Vesna:)

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on November 16, 2006
You use your words in a wonderful manner and ended this poem with a great twist from the usual descirptions. Victor

Reviewed on November 16, 2006
I love the way you write. :) Excellent!!!!!!! Yet again.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Marcia Duning (Reader)
Reviewed on November 16, 2006
Bless those who go against the tide,
no matter what.
Hold on by your teeth
for your Moment.


Well said, Pod

Reviewed by Steve Ralph
Reviewed on November 15, 2006
Lovely Poem,and very well written.
Thank you for sharing it,
Steve

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 15, 2006

""those who go against the tide,
no matter what" ... the crux of this powerful poem ...

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on November 15, 2006
Wonderful write...you paint a vivid picture, and the ending was great! Loved the message in this write...
Blessings,
JOyce Bowling

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on November 15, 2006
The Picture is awesome....beautiful
and your words!!!
make this an experience
just beautiful!!!

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on November 14, 2006
Dearest Pea

I always come away alive and vital from your most illustrious Den,....and you never fail to give undoubted hope and inspiration to your adoring and incredible readership..

Never stop doing.... what you do do well, my dear friend..

Love and Peace

Peter

PS

I am still enjoying my hiatus from the Den,... but rest assured I am popping in now and then.... to read all your scintillating works,.... and bless you sweet pea for your stop at my Den, and your most comforting words..

You can be assured that you and yours are in my thoughts and prayers..


Reviewed by S J (Reader)
Reviewed on November 13, 2006
This is a premium piece, Phyllis!
I love the title of your poem... "Skin, if you Have To".
"Bless those who go against the tide,
no matter what.
Hold on by your teeth
for your Moment"

Excellent writing!

Thank you,
Sheila

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on November 13, 2006
Thank you, Pea! We had a backyard red and orange and yellow... now we have bare branches. What a gorgeous picture of autumn, you've painted, here.

Carmen

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on November 13, 2006
What a wonderful Autumnal offering Pea, visually bursting with emotional brillance and colour.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 13, 2006
Enjoyed this one!!

Peace and Love

Tinka

Reviewed by Constance Gotsch
Reviewed on November 13, 2006
I love the metaphor for going against the grain, and the imagry of clouds scutting their plans, bronze cloaks and trees bowing too low to be safe. This is one of your best, I think

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on November 13, 2006
You create a visual painting with your writing, Pea...excellent

peace and love, Carole

Reviewed by Gloria Gay
Reviewed on November 13, 2006
The intensity of this poem and the myriad of instant visuals it creates makes it one wonderful treat, to read again and again.

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on November 13, 2006
Autumn~ "Skin, if you Have To..." An interesting and Creative topic to a well written display, of imagery and emotion!
Wonderful, Phyllis!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 13, 2006
Bless those who go against the tide,
no matter what.
Hold on by your teeth
for your Moment.

Love your ending, Phyllis!

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 13, 2006
Nature unfold itself in a tapestry of emotions when you put your mind and heart into one of these brilliant intense writes.

Fee

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 12, 2006
Your kinship with nature is made most evident via your verses, Pea. I truly respect and appreciate this as I am a total nature lover. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed on November 12, 2006
A wonderful nature poem.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 12, 2006
Glorious gift of autumal splendor, you've given us Pea! thank you!
A joy to read!...ET


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