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Daisy Magnet'd Fridge Note
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The few who have missed me {Hi:)}must wonder where I've been. 'Woikin'~!!' Well, mostly;). Been entering competitions and concentrating on getting back in the habit of sending snail submissions. Bit of a drag, but it's past time. Good news = being forced to work harder. Bad = I don't dare post most of the work for fear it will be considered published! Miss you guys so much, I just had to write something for A.D. Rhyme's experimental, but...does it work? Dunno!! Too sentimental? Dunno!! Say what you will {she said nervously]. Just say somepn! Like I said, I missy'all. 'Pea <3" {Recognize the heart, Sandie?}
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There are moments too sweet to save.
Not that anything happens. The sun sets,
leaving a farewell note on pink paper.
Sunlight dances a water ballet.
Someone lifts us with a word of praise.
We find a card with black-eyed daisies
and manage to send it on time. Amazing!

Or maybe we see toddlers playing
in sand, reminding us not to have regrets
about petty battles over shovels and pails.
Or we wake up on the right side of the bed
and the coffee is hot, or it’s payday.

It can be as simple as Hi from a neighbor
or the yukky hello kiss of a pet.
The fact trees look greener after it rains.
A promise received or made is kept.
Remembering all we have learned from pain,
like knowing to take small steps.

There are moments too sweet to save.
Beauty is, they save us.

(c) Phyllis Jean Green


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 Reviews of "Daisy Magnet'd Fridge Note "
Reviewed on August 26, 2003
It works most excellent, Phyllis! You do use words wisely... love it..
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed on August 26, 2003
yes, sweet pea, i've wondered about you, glad you stopped by! hope you stay a while; you have a lot of friends here at the den! wonderful write, you haven't lost your touch, m'lady! :D (((HUGS))) and love, your texas friend, karen lynn.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 25, 2003
This is creative and totally enjoyable. I love it and I'm glad to see you posting, hope you stay awhile;-)!

Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme (Reader)
Reviewed on August 25, 2003
Ahhh Pea - this is lovely. Very Clever! :0)

Reviewed on August 25, 2003
"Daisy Magnet'd Fridge Note". It is profound and beautiful. The flow, the contensts and the form make this poem an outstanding one.

I have enjoyed a good meal.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHu

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on August 25, 2003
Hey PeaJ,
I love this - gives me warm and fuzzies all over. Especially like this line: "The sun sets, leaving a farewell note on pink paper."

Great to see you come 'round!
Tami

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on August 25, 2003
:) Not too sentimental at all, Phyllis! Some excellent imagery and has a soothing cadence. Good luck on your submissions! I've been doing the ezine route, already rejected once... Ah, but somewhere is my market! :D


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