I reach deep into her seeking those rays of light
that continuously trace the edges of my desires
just like the magician pulling a rabbit out of a hat
She spreads a smile in celebration of sensuality
raising her cup to the revolving moon of my lust
Her hips thrust into the black of space meeting mine
where we calypso our way to heaven’s front gate
She prompts me in the direction of collected dreams
and soothes me endlessly with moist palpitations
and narrow undulations leading to a sky of parables
filled with a burning sunset of erotic calculations
spewing reflections of soul in a watercolor madness
The confluence of our veins meets a falling sun;
A vinculum of bodies, hearts, souls and minds
and blends in with the scattered stars that shine
Rabidity permeates our thoughts in obsession
with a hunger that never ends and never tires
and I become inebriated by the radiance of her
as she spreads her body out in anticipated love
prepared for the rewarded labor of receiving me
She closes her eyes and sinks into the horizon
as the waves inundate her in sensuous pleasure
while the gravity of the moon pulls her under
and her satiated body then becomes my ocean
*This is dedicated to Tami Ryan in support of my work and for being a true champion to all women who have undergone abuse in all forms. Let the world know that all women are Goddesses.
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Reviews of "Bodies of Light *Dedicated to Tami Ryan"
Beautiful, once again Amor, beautiful! Romance is woven through everything you do...a style that appeals to the heart and soul of us all. Bravo, splendid job!
My GOD Amor, you must realize that the way you write further solidifies my theory that YOU ought to be the U.S. Poet Laureate of 2004! Pablo Neruda-style with an erotic stroke of genius.
and I mean all of that and a bottle of massage oil!
blessin's and many more muses come to visit you,
cynth'ya lewis reed
i think tami liked it :) i sure did--you write us so beautifully, and we are grateful and humbled--BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 21, 2004
Amor your writing just seems to get better
and better ...this is so lovely ...and
a wonderful tribute ot dear Tami...floria
Reviewed by Woman Words (Reader)
Reviewed on March 21, 2004
Ahhh. The healing, the beauty, the desire. As always, the satisfaction of reading you
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on March 21, 2004
Amor.. how very irresistible is the man who recognizes the power and beauty of women and dedicates his talent to honoring one of the very BEST among our gender! You write with soul... your tribute, divine! She is a tireless wonder, isn't she? Oh, yes. And you, dear poet, are "one of the good guys!" katy xox.
Wow! All this for supporting your work! I could only imagine the intensity of what your devotion would be for a lifetime partner! I'll bet Tami was blushing! But I'll also bet she's never felt so flattered in her life! Great write Amor! Lisa
Incredibly "dense" poem in which we are presented with a veritable "feast" with every line! A sensual "Christmas", truly! My special "delicacies" were: "She...soothes me endlessly with moist palpitations and narrow undulations leading to a sky of parables filled with a burning sunset of erotic calculations": fusion of emotional and physical "highs". Thank you. KB
I c-c-c-an't type. (Geez, need I tell you I'm blushing?)
I'm wildly flattered. Correction: beyond flattered.
I so enjoy your work, Amor - you inspire me, unbelievably.
(And let us all celebrate Goddesses everywhere!)
Yowsa - so many incredible lines here:
"She prompts me in the direction of collected dreams"
"spewing reflections of soul in a watercolor madness"
"A vinculum of bodies, hearts, souls and minds
and blends in with the scattered stars that shine" <--- oh, I really like that one!
"Rabidity permeates our thoughts in obsession
with a hunger that never ends and never tires
and I become inebriated by the radiance of her" <--- omg, what woman wouldn't want a man to be inebriated by her? Whew. (she smiles...)
I think I'll simply close my eyes and sink into the horizon now...
This was very dreamy and showers the reader in rich imagery
this is beautiful and very generous
although I loved it all- this stands out:
She spreads a smile in celebration of sensuality
raising her cup to the revolving moon of my lust
**I honestly wish I had thought it** well done - Donna
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It is a pleasure to read this piece. An eye-full of imagery here! Excellent:) Sheila
steady hands, here...
wow are you a sight for sore eyes..I've missed my aztec mirror image...lol...
much love,
**Mari**
God bless...
Deborah :o))
bravo!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
think i may need some oxygen....GASP, GASP!! LOL
and I mean all of that and a bottle of massage oil!
blessin's and many more muses come to visit you,
cynth'ya lewis reed
i think tami liked it :) i sure did--you write us so beautifully, and we are grateful and humbled--BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
and better ...this is so lovely ...and
a wonderful tribute ot dear Tami...floria
I agree With The 'Most' some are real demons..lol!!
A real gentleman you are...any womans dream!!
Love Tinka
i might add, let the world know "most" woman are goddesses ;)
Smooooooooooch...nice one.
Elizabeth
I c-c-c-an't type. (Geez, need I tell you I'm blushing?)
I'm wildly flattered. Correction: beyond flattered.
I so enjoy your work, Amor - you inspire me, unbelievably.
(And let us all celebrate Goddesses everywhere!)
Yowsa - so many incredible lines here:
"She prompts me in the direction of collected dreams"
"spewing reflections of soul in a watercolor madness"
"A vinculum of bodies, hearts, souls and minds
and blends in with the scattered stars that shine" <--- oh, I really like that one!
"Rabidity permeates our thoughts in obsession
with a hunger that never ends and never tires
and I become inebriated by the radiance of her" <--- omg, what woman wouldn't want a man to be inebriated by her? Whew. (she smiles...)
I think I'll simply close my eyes and sink into the horizon now...
A thousand thanks
and even more hugs,
Tami
this is beautiful and very generous
although I loved it all- this stands out:
She spreads a smile in celebration of sensuality
raising her cup to the revolving moon of my lust
**I honestly wish I had thought it** well done - Donna
Tami will be honored!
Reindeer