A woman is like a mountain
like the volcano awakened
spewing out fire and desire
The heat in her belly growing
exploding into steam and lava
radiating her energy to the sky
propelling rivers of red passion
down the steep slopes of want
across the terrain of my dreams
igniting my life and imagination
sparking my heart to beat profound
She annexes my soul by satiated eyes
becoming possession of her obsession
Her voice exacts rhythms from my body
augmenting a melody within my heart
She takes me on spiraling journeys
ascending rapidly through the clouds
beyond the ancient blue of midnight
She touches me and my skin ignites
in a combustible mixture of atoms
flowing unimpeded in a river of fire
and I see ecstasy in her infinite eyes
while I am burning in her tender grasp
we become elevated in love’s caress
leveled high beyond the embers rise
where two flames merge into the vapor
condensing fast within cerulean skies
the ascension struck our hearts forever
the bond pronounced in between a kiss
then we can no longer touch the ground
for we find ourselves swept into a dream
tracing outlines of love’s sweet mystery
from ashes where the heart cannot die
As always, you capture passion in a way few can...the dream we wish never to end!
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on March 19, 2007
This one is heated with passion.
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on March 18, 2007
Very beautifully written! Well done! Holly
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on March 18, 2007
Amor this is so stunning I love the way you evolve a woman and love in this beautiful poetry.
"tracing outlines of love’s sweet mystery
from ashes where the heart cannot die "
Par Excellent work and penmanship a pleasure to read.
What a joy to welcome your sparkling love poetry, and you, dear Amor, once more! It's been a while - hope you're doing well, my friend. With thanks for your wonderful words about my poetry, and very much hoping to read more of your own in the times to come,
Love & {{{{{{{{{hugs}}}}}}}}}}}} from your ever admiring friend,
Alexandra*
Amor, the passion that permeates this incredibly sensual poem is so exquisitely romantic, filled with the joy of all that love is meant to possess.Outstanding! So good to have you back!
Love,
Eileen
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on March 17, 2007
You can really love a woman with your
stunning words Amor..
Thanks for sharing this masterpiece.
Remarkable write full of passion, colors of romantic animation. I do admire words like this. It sets my pulse to racing. Only a true artist of canvas can do that to this woman.
Susan
Oh, my--think me monitor (and glasses) melted! Wwwhhhheeeeeewwwwwww, this is one PASSIONATE write, Amor, exquisitely penned y e a r n i n g! Well done.
Bringing new heights to passion, Amor...eroticism at its best! Molten lava in orgasmic release...the title elevates us to where we all want to be in love's embrace...
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~been a long time, man~and are you a sight for sore eyes~
The poem, as lush and passionate...as ever, my friend~
As always, you capture passion in a way few can...the dream we wish never to end!
"tracing outlines of love’s sweet mystery
from ashes where the heart cannot die "
Par Excellent work and penmanship a pleasure to read.
Peace,
Joselyn
Love Tinka
Love & {{{{{{{{{hugs}}}}}}}}}}}} from your ever admiring friend,
Alexandra*
Love,
Eileen
stunning words Amor..
Thanks for sharing this masterpiece.
Reindeer
Susan
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Sage
condensing fast within cerulean skies
i like this-nice lovefest
thanks,
~D.
Love this, Amor.
(You should be exhausted.) (smiley)
Love,
Elizabeth