She saw me through a neon prism
while reciting her own visions of love
while I, on the other side of waiting
was unaware that I lay within her eye
She approached in the form of ether
that rendered me in a subtle shade
reminiscent of a serene indifference
while every atom in my body cried
She transformed her refined affection
through vibrations that awoke my soul
with every sentient fiber of her being
directed towards each beat of my heart
She appeared within the midnight hour
to release me from the grasp of dream
leaving me speechless in her beauty
obvious even in the absence of light
She called me from the wispy shadows
where she lingered at the edge of night
waiting there for some kind of answer
that would impel me to be by her side
The girl with neon eyes approached me
that kissed me from far angles of illusion
that swayed me to the arch of the wind
tracing my heart with her dainty fingers
Causing me to sail headlong into her soul
and I had no alternate choice but comply
to the warm spirit of her ultimate obsession
and submit to the intimate reverence of light
You are so talented! I had also tried to use felt-pen to draw too in the past, but the painting didn't come out good. It is very difficult to draw in felt-pen, but you have done a wonderful job with this painting.
Lovely work of art and poem!!! I loved them both!!!
This whole pkg, is filled with exuberance and color~!
Wow! I am stunned by your imagery and writing Amor!
Lovely, Gracious and down right pure!
Warmly,Warrior "Spirit" Lady Sheeeoox
STay POsitive!
STay SAFE!
BE Happy!
I enjoyed this Amor, it's dreamy and the refrence
to light is reverant for sure. I was caught by the
title also. It's mystical and dreamlike. Great!
Also the art is great.
An excellent write, great imagery creates a a bit of mystical mood within the lines. Nice artwork, the two compliment each other well, great combination. Enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Reviewed by Theresa curnow (Reader)
Reviewed on July 2, 2007
wow, brilliant stuff. I loved this a lot and the artwork is fantastic. You are very talented....love and blessings, Theresa.
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on July 1, 2007
Just really awesome writing Amor..
Love the art work Amor..
Happy to read you again Amor..
What a gem !! I particularly admire "on the other side of waiting"
and "obvious even in the absence of light." Plus you chose the
perfect illustration. B r a v o . ringed by flashing neon!! 'Pea' <3
A man after my own heart..I love this poem and your artwork is simply beautiful..I shall read more, I am enthralled by your words..
"comply to the warm spirit of her ultimate obsession and submit..." now that's an awakened soul!!!!
It is a compliment when someone traps your person inside their eyelids. Your words are grateful for the chance to dance inside another's glance. It is music, passion and art.
Love,
Susan
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You are so talented! I had also tried to use felt-pen to draw too in the past, but the painting didn't come out good. It is very difficult to draw in felt-pen, but you have done a wonderful job with this painting.
Lovely work of art and poem!!! I loved them both!!!
Sandie May Angel :o)
Wow! I am stunned by your imagery and writing Amor!
Lovely, Gracious and down right pure!
Warmly,Warrior "Spirit" Lady Sheeeoox
STay POsitive!
STay SAFE!
BE Happy!
Regis
to light is reverant for sure. I was caught by the
title also. It's mystical and dreamlike. Great!
Also the art is great.
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Love the art work Amor..
Happy to read you again Amor..
and "obvious even in the absence of light." Plus you chose the
perfect illustration. B r a v o . ringed by flashing neon!! 'Pea' <3
Be safe,
Karen
ET
"comply to the warm spirit of her ultimate obsession and submit..." now that's an awakened soul!!!!
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber
Love,
Susan
Love Tinka
Lordy, what you can do with words and a felt pen.
Elizabeth