I was so intrigued by this woman divine
who delved into my world without fears
venturing forth in this romantic alliance
to make love just as easily as breathing
transforming each movement into an art
translating desire without remuneration
giving freely with the prospects of need
to be satiated whenever the time arose
without shame of what her body craved
I stood firmly in the mirror of her dreams
reflecting the lust that I saw in her eyes
predisposed to every fantasy imagined
ready to devour each other in the night
amenable to her every whim and desire
wrapped up in the anxious heat of skin
as if two caterpillars in the same cocoon
wriggled about in fires that consumed us
concerned not where the ashes may fall
I remained intrigued by this neon goddess
who opened up wide the gates of heaven
while she slid above me like a falling rain
with her breasts suspended like clouds
as beads of sweat trickled to her nipples
cascading on down to my tongue and lips
soothing in the cool of an unfettered night
and her hips swayed to rhyming thunder
that matched the rhythms of our breaths
I could no longer escape the intricate fire
that engulfed me as she cried in the dark
precipitating the release of our two bodies
that in the spasms became suddenly one
bringing us to there orgasm simultaneous
while I found myself swimming upstream
in a dense fog that enveloped us in elation
leaving us gasping for air in the aftermath
intrigued in the silence of a thousand stars
This is totally AWESOME! Amor!
So delicate like a fleeting butterfly! in flight!
Romance in flight!
so happy for you (Both)
Keep the passions burning strong!
STay Positive!
STay SAFE!
Warm Light, Love and Peace! Warrior PURPLE Lady Sheeeoox
P.s. Your writing style astounds ME! :)
I will savor this treasure Amor!
It is apparent in your beautiful, sensuous poetry, that you are a lover of women and naturally thoughts of them inspire your awesome writes! This is another jewel to add to your poetry treasure chest! SC
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on July 14, 2007
Agree with Victor. Thrall...yes.
Elizabeth
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on July 14, 2007
She has got you in her thrall...but then it must be pleasant there. Victor
Amor,
I am intrigued, who is this mysterious woman? This sounds so sensual, and erotic and I want some...lol You have written quite a poem, I must read it again..I completely feel your passion!
Wow, Let me say it again, I am intrigued!
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So delicate like a fleeting butterfly! in flight!
Romance in flight!
so happy for you (Both)
Keep the passions burning strong!
STay Positive!
STay SAFE!
Warm Light, Love and Peace! Warrior PURPLE Lady Sheeeoox
P.s. Your writing style astounds ME! :)
I will savor this treasure Amor!
Eileen
This is the kind of lovemaking that involves body, mind and spirit. If you can write like this, you can love like this.
Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*
Sage
Love Tinka
more way more than sexy........
a cosmic bang, cerebal, physical, and metaphysical write
wow
Elizabeth
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
As you intrigue me with perfectly illustrated lines: perfection!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
I am intrigued, who is this mysterious woman? This sounds so sensual, and erotic and I want some...lol You have written quite a poem, I must read it again..I completely feel your passion!
Wow, Let me say it again, I am intrigued!
Peace, Love and Light,
Amber "V"