So many girls thumb through magazines
with avant-garde names upon the covers
wishing that they looked like models too
so to men they would make better lovers
What they wish for while they starve away
always striving to shed a few extra pounds
going on new endless and unhealthy diets
in ads of losing weight by leaps and bounds
They let television in as if it were a religion
with actresses favored by fortune and fame
to lead their lives to be in some way cloned
the whole entertainment industry is to blame
Women do not understand for some reason
that a tummy tuck or boob job may rearrange
but not the woman they are deep down inside
for certain things that they should not change
Some know some men think they are beautiful
if they may be overweight with a little cushion
and not be concerned with what others think
or of all these silly plans that they are pushing
Rubinesque is a form they may not be aware
where most queen-sized women could be art
that to some men they would be chosen first
that what really matters lies within their heart
Of the most sexiest women that I have seen
between the young and mature I have known
among the thin and a few pounds overweight
it is the latter who can always bring me home
Most inexperienced young know so very little
an older woman knows how to please a man
and thin bodies can attract for a limited time
but average women do things few others can
Hoping they love themselves for who they are
most any woman thin or large can be their best
if they be young or old makes so little difference
it is merely a preference that must pass the test
Women must know they are not made the same
and in a real world the same rule applies to men
what really matters is what is found in the heart
as self esteem by confidence makes them a ten
Wow! So much said within the lines of this write my friend, you've touched this woman's heart with your words of honesty and wisdom. I always told my daughter that her personality, your honesty, and her genuine zeal for life and the compassion for others would bring her greater joy in life than working so hard to achieve a stick thin body with a miserable person hidden within! She is now married with her own daughter, she is just an average size twenty two year old with a few baby pounds left over, but her beautiful smile and cheerful disposition and happy marriage is more important than a few pounds! Well done my friend! A wise write! Enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on August 5, 2007
Somehow self-love and appreciation of self fell by the wayside as "selfish" and a host of other crippling adjectives promoted by those who would cripple rather than encourage to be the best you can be. I am always amazed at those who think a pair of tits, a penis implant, or a face-lift will cure the dis-ease inside.
As Henry Higgins said in My Fair Lady...'why not clean up the mess inside?'
A fitting work to describe the world of relationships today. It is pleasant to find someone with the depth of appreciation you have of expressing so well, the need to be ourselves.
It is my belief that women who seek to be enhanced are those with image problems in the beginning. Each of us were given a body chemical make up. When we start to fool around with that chemical makeup we destroy or damage the balance that was given to us. I have everything that was given to me at birth and having nothing enhanced I'm very balanced and intune with my own body thus, I know what my passions are and the fact that every muscle, sinew and beat is in perfect proportions to what I was given at the beginning. I'm also going out on a limb here to say that more women try suicide even though they've had everything tucked and taught to get them that "Appearance", and end up not happy with that "appearance" anyway because it isn't an appearance problem as much as it is an idenity one. Your words are perfect for the message conveyed. WE are given perfection in different ways and we weren't meant to all look alike. This whole world would be mundane if we were all cloned.
Love,
Susan
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on August 4, 2007
Beautiful writing,Oh myyyyyyyyyyyyy...Hugssss
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 4, 2007
I agree with you 100% Amor...
And we wouldn't be here if women
wouldn't have carried us for 9 months?
Of course us men had to get it started?
Thanks always for your support.
Yore sketch is still on my web.....
Amor,
Well stated, yes, loving yourself for who you are inside that radiates outwardly for all to see and love also. Bravo, well said, I am a petite 5'3" shapely woman, and I surely know how to pleasure a man..You are a true man from the inside out. Thank you for such a beautiful sentiment!! I truly adore you!
Gosh Amighty, Champagne Man! I had no clue that beautiful men like you truly existed, but alass there is but one of you and not enough of you to go around. SC
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Blessings,
Joyce B.
As Henry Higgins said in My Fair Lady...'why not clean up the mess inside?'
A fitting work to describe the world of relationships today. It is pleasant to find someone with the depth of appreciation you have of expressing so well, the need to be ourselves.
Elizabeth
Love Tinka
Eileen
Love,
Susan
And we wouldn't be here if women
wouldn't have carried us for 9 months?
Of course us men had to get it started?
Thanks always for your support.
Yore sketch is still on my web.....
Well stated, yes, loving yourself for who you are inside that radiates outwardly for all to see and love also. Bravo, well said, I am a petite 5'3" shapely woman, and I surely know how to pleasure a man..You are a true man from the inside out. Thank you for such a beautiful sentiment!! I truly adore you!
Peace, Love, Light,
Amber "V" Moonstone