She arrived suddenly in tangerine bliss
With my password clenched in her fist
She touched me… and my heart ignited
with a gaze of spontaneous combustion
She lead me by the hand to her Nirvana
where she laid out the galaxy at my feet
I savored her feminine form like fine wine
taking dosages beyond recommendation
and I became intoxicated with her beauty
long after I looked into her heart and soul
I cupped the Shangri-La of her breasts…
and then skimmed the slope of her neck
with one long probing kiss after another…
with my eyes wide and full of imagination
journeying through her dark tangled forests
a phoenix arisen from the ashes of her life
for her the day by day had never been kind
and the etching of life riddled her with pain
but in surviving she brought out the magic
as she unfolded tropical fruits from clouds
Rainforests still in those precious strands
tasting of the morning dew and nectarine
she kissed me and I fell through the sky
she arose and my soul followed anxious
dazed within the trail of stars behind her
when she pronounced herself as mine
she kissed me and I fell through the sky
she arose and my soul followed anxious
dazed within the trail of stars behind her
when she pronounced herself as mine .....
Whoaaaaa! What an uplifting love treasured poem, you have written Amor!
Your pen writes imagery mystically and I love it each and ever time!
You write so divine!
Warm hugs and Much love, Warrior Lady Sheeeoox
STay Positive!
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on November 19, 2007
As hard as I try, I cannot write romantic poetry like this. Holly
Ohhhhhh....this makes my soul sigh.....the ending is great!
she kissed me and I fell through the sky
she arose and my soul followed anxious
dazed within the trail of stars behind her
when she pronounced herself as mine
Wow!
Who needs breakfast, now... when they have "Tangerine Bliss"?
This woke me up this morning!
Your words travel in a romantic journey, toward that which no one can pass you by...She's all yours!
Excellent!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
This beautiful write romantic sensual
and so much passion
The page is filled with the
Whispers of desires and pure emotions
Stunning view of sensual feelings
And romance and a blissful ending
Outstanding piece of love poetry!!
Love Peace and many hugssss...Morning Star
Wonderful edenic fusion of mind, body, spirit. A total cornucopia of fruitful longing and union. Love and worth-ship fully bestowed and consummated. The Pre-Raphaelites would be wholly inspired in all their various artforms. Tender and visual romance, Amor. Thank you for this sweetness. Kate xx
Amor, I sigh with deep delight and admiration for how your poems can make us females feel!;-) Thank you dear sweet man! Also thanks for your well wishes, you are a class act!
Amor, Your visuals are quite amazingly beautiful. You have such depth and emotion. Seeking pleasure of forbidden fruit or unreachable fruit, can be quite inspirational. You have a warmth and a way with words that transcends the reader right into your soul.
Beautiful piece of poetry. I especially loved this verse:
"She lead me by the hand to her Nirvana
where she laid out the galaxy at my feet
I savored her feminine form like fine wine
taking dosages beyond recommendation
and I became intoxicated with her beauty
long after I looked into her heart and soul "
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"
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she arose and my soul followed anxious
dazed within the trail of stars behind her
when she pronounced herself as mine .....
PERFECTION !!!!
intuitively know exactly what a woman wants and desires
in the melody of your words and heart.
well done amor!
katie
Your pen writes imagery mystically and I love it each and ever time!
You write so divine!
Warm hugs and Much love, Warrior Lady Sheeeoox
STay Positive!
she kissed me and I fell through the sky
she arose and my soul followed anxious
dazed within the trail of stars behind her
when she pronounced herself as mine
Who needs breakfast, now... when they have "Tangerine Bliss"?
This woke me up this morning!
Your words travel in a romantic journey, toward that which no one can pass you by...She's all yours!
Excellent!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
(like PJ said, "Luscious!:>{:
clr
and so much passion
The page is filled with the
Whispers of desires and pure emotions
Stunning view of sensual feelings
And romance and a blissful ending
Outstanding piece of love poetry!!
Love Peace and many hugssss...Morning Star
Hope the is the right way of saying it........lol!!
Love Tinka
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Be safe,
Karen
Stay safe Amor.
Love,
ET
Love,
annie
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
ROFL...
Elizabeth
Beautiful piece of poetry. I especially loved this verse:
"She lead me by the hand to her Nirvana
where she laid out the galaxy at my feet
I savored her feminine form like fine wine
taking dosages beyond recommendation
and I became intoxicated with her beauty
long after I looked into her heart and soul "
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"