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Alabaster Clouds
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music by "NorthStar" Joe Atilano composer performed by Joe Atilano & NorthStar (unauthorized copying prohibited)

Guitar-Joe Atilano    Keyboards-Amor Sabor    Bass-Javier Avila

Congas/percussion-Mac McClendon     Drums-Willie Windmon

 “Alabaster Clouds”

 
alabaster clouds lumber across a blue marbled sky
the heavy wind is a traveler in its fragrant disguise
relentlessly the turquoise sea sweeps amber sands
where swirls develop beyond the dunes and fjords
I am but a passenger boarding your ship of thoughts
in the slivers of your memory I wander the distance
you roam the deserted beach looking for fragments
a shattered moon answers as it traces the morning
in its heavenly embrace it kisses away all the stars
that have united in the congregation of intimate love
 
here in the edge of a liquid constellation amassed
in the simile of your smile I turn into powdered rain
sprinkled across your imagination I will touch you
while you wander in the dunes and fractured time
my eyes follow your every move as you pass by
and I flash like neon lightning in my ecstatic bliss
a hazy mist accrues over this passion of bodies
a modest layer surrounds us in the hidden coves
we inhale each other in the grasp of the planets
as they orbit in the gravity of a deep rooted love
 
alabaster clouds above traverse from west to east
we become the benefactors of what is left behind
we settle in the distance and synchronize thoughts
blending into a hollowed horizon to be rearranged
merged into one we explore beyond the propinquity
of two hearts and souls lost in the peripheral sky
love becomes an entity separate from ourselves
engrossing us in the splendor of warmth and joy
expressed within soft caress and passionate kiss
where we float away into our awaiting paradise
 

© 2011 Amor Sabor

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Alabaster Clouds"
Reviewed by Joy Hale
Reviewed on December 18, 2013
Delicously sensual! Ahhh, Mr. Romance... you have done it once again! One can get lost in a romantic field of roses where your words are in bloom. I especially like this poem that alludes to the passion of love instead of graphic words... it invites the mind to paint with its own colors. And the beat of the music only adds to this five star performance! Joy Hale

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on April 22, 2011
The combination of the beauty and passion in your music and your poetry is an extremely pleasant experience, Amor. May the LORD continue to bless others through your gifts.

Sincerely, Rhonda

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on April 19, 2011
Beautiful writing....wonderful phrasing....

Anna

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 17, 2011
enjoyed both music and poem ...

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on April 15, 2011
Beautifully written my friend.
Peace
Tony

Reviewed on April 13, 2011
Amor,

A beautiful romantic poem and the music is great!

Mary

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on April 13, 2011
Such a beautifully, dreamy romantic piece. I cannot believe that you want to change your genre...You do this so well.

Thank you for always making me feel as though your poetry is about me..that's what you do best, make the women feel good by reading such a master of romance...

Much peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
Reviewed on April 13, 2011
Ethereal, dream-like, and romantic. I loved "the heavy wind is a traveler in its fragrant disguise"...such a beautiful line among so many others. The tangible images alone are lovely, but the depth of love and soul are so very appealing and touching. "where we float away into our awaiting paradise" ... yes, I love that. Beautiful write, Amor! ~Best, Elizabeth

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
Reviewed on April 13, 2011
a true master of romance with an enviable gift not only for poetry but music! flash like neon lightning, what a line!

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on April 12, 2011
Amor,
What strikes me the most about this piece, besides the flowing, wonderful romance, is your unique imagery. Just when I think the line is going in a certain direction, you change the visual, like "powered rain sprinkled across your imagination...". I especially like the first verse, because the creativity there set the mood. Well done:)
Sheila

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 12, 2011
Reads more like a paradise of the mind, while glimpses of real beauty appear as lovers immersed in a paradise of their own making.

Ron

Reviewed on April 12, 2011
a passenger boarding your ship of thoughts.......what a ride. Great write. Morgan

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on April 12, 2011
Eloquent, Amor. -gene.

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on April 12, 2011
In search of Your "Alabaster Clouds", Amor....Oh! to find you there,
for romance...not being able to resist your charm...so weaved, from your elegant words that billow of marshmellow days ahead..Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on April 12, 2011
Wow, Amor, Your sophistocated style is intoxicating, especially with the sonic elements you use and to top it all off...your uplifting and sparkling music!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed on April 12, 2011
Breathtaking beauty, where love is an entity all emcompassing yet separate from ourselves! The music is so beautiful, your gifts are many Amor.

Reviewed by Laura Fall
Reviewed on April 12, 2011
Lovely writing indeed and sparkling romance well told .Well done and great write also Laura

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on April 12, 2011
Oh my this is beautiful sweet man..almost can feel the passionate breeze..... oh just wonderful...Hugss

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on April 12, 2011
VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on April 11, 2011
i came by to bask in this beautiful experience of words and music...a delightful treat, I felt swept into a tropical paradise, thank you.


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