She is a dawn catcher nude at the patio door
catching the yawn of the early morning sun
like a child greeting the warm rays of the sun
and gives it a name with an innocent smile
She tickles the sky with pomegranate whispers
that she corrals through the lobes of my ear
teasingly, she kisses me with root beer eyes
and rides the elegant dawn with her laughter
Her skin glistens in light of tangerine morning
as refraction pronounces her ethereal form
with her back to me in panoramic splendor
for I can see sunrise between her firm thighs
while she feels the warm weight of my stare
She caresses my tongue with her image
sweeping out sighs from the base of my throat
with the sweetness of Hershey kiss nipples
and the honeyed Goosebumps of bare flesh
The spiked punch of her breasts overwhelms
and I become intoxicated within her sins
for the decadence of her is all I crave for
and I find that I cannot get out of this bed
I measure her behind with palms for calipers
unblemished nectarines fresh off of the vine
and I touch slim frail shoulders made for lace
and the Napa valley for her sensuous spine
She plants the grapes of muscatel kisses
my lips then sink fully upon her softness
and a crashing wave of light flares up
from the surging center of our desires
and suddenly orchids bloom from our sweat
Her erotic tongue reads novels on my chest
beginning with the letters of the alphabet
as she straddles me with the silk of her body
and adorns me with a half-devious smile
tapping energy with the rhythm of her belly
while harvesting the phantoms of my lust
Her long hair cascades over my heart
as she goes into a trance of undulations
riding the waves of her euphoric camel
over the Arabian sands of eternal bliss
She catches the dawn with a raw splendor
and interweaves it with refreshed dreams
that we carry seamlessly into the evening
and while engaged in our infinite embrace
*A year ago this week when I had barely joined the AD family, I had the honor of being read and CORRECTED by Elizabeth on one of my very first posts although she did enjoy the piece then. She has remained a steadfast reader of my work since and I will be damned if I do not at least repay her with the most tempting piece in my arsenal.
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Reviews of "Dawn Catcher (Dedicated to Elizabeth Lucas-Taylor)"
Amor Amor,I do adore the way you write POETRY.
Best wishes always
from
Kay
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2003
Amor,
"Her erotic tongue reads novels on my chest
beginning with the letters of the alphabet
as she straddles me with the silk of her body
and adorns me with a half-devious smile
tapping energy with the rhythm of her belly
while harvesting the phantoms of my lust "
this is so excellent
And a wonderful tribute for Elizabeth !!!
Peg
Elizabeth in times continuum age means nothing;-) Go for it!... Amor, you have bewitched the realms of sorcerers, stealing all their magic to place in this poetic tribute all the exotic, erotic,alchemy, leaving them empty;-)Superb as only you can do;-)!
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2003
Keep writing like this and age will not keep the two of you apart :-)
Great poem dedicated to a great lady! Amor, this is delicious! So many great passages. I love this one too:
Her long hair cascades over my heart
as she goes into a trance of undulations
riding the waves of her euphoric camel
over the Arabian sands of eternal bliss
I never ever say wow...but wow! This is gorgeous. Superbly written and dedicated to a fine and generous lady who is probably still feeling quite faint!
Chrissie :)
Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2003
Beautiful tribute, as only you can put imagery into full grace of class..
A wonderful tribute
to our dear Elizabeth.
She has corrected many
of us on a word we
may have misspelled..
She does it with such
grace though...
PSSSST...lol
"root beer eyes"
"hershey kisses"
"Spiked punch"
"muscatel kisses"
"riding the waves of her euphoric camel over the Arabian sands of eternal bliss"
This is as intoxicating and erotic as the Arabian horses racing across the desert carrying an Arabian knight to his queen.
such a sexy tribute, done with lots of taste
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2003
[smiles] I was just catching up on emails when you flashed on my screen. My gosh. I sound like a super delicious lunch. I am extremely flattered, dear heart. You are still too young for me, but if you keep writing like this, I may over look that slight handicap. Love you, and thank you.
You've made my day...perhaps my life.
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Wowwwwwwwweeeeeee! Whew, is it warm in here, or is it me? Yikes! Wonderful imagery, and I love the verbiage in this write.
Outstanding write! Full marks and a clapping, standing ovation.
Tami
Hugs,
Maria
lovley as ever, Aztec panther.
**Mari**
~Nikki~
Best wishes always
from
Kay
"Her erotic tongue reads novels on my chest
beginning with the letters of the alphabet
as she straddles me with the silk of her body
and adorns me with a half-devious smile
tapping energy with the rhythm of her belly
while harvesting the phantoms of my lust "
this is so excellent
And a wonderful tribute for Elizabeth !!!
Peg
Jenni
Reindeer
Her long hair cascades over my heart
as she goes into a trance of undulations
riding the waves of her euphoric camel
over the Arabian sands of eternal bliss
Chrissie :)
Peace, Dove ~
to our dear Elizabeth.
She has corrected many
of us on a word we
may have misspelled..
She does it with such
grace though...
PSSSST...lol
Excellent write...
Trixie :)
You are Super!!
Love
Tinka
ah amor your pen doth dip in tranquil beautiful waters. miss you hope all is well
love
josefina
"root beer eyes"
"hershey kisses"
"Spiked punch"
"muscatel kisses"
"riding the waves of her euphoric camel over the Arabian sands of eternal bliss"
This is as intoxicating and erotic as the Arabian horses racing across the desert carrying an Arabian knight to his queen.
such a sexy tribute, done with lots of taste
You've made my day...perhaps my life.