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What Place is This (Melissa's Garden) Dedicated to Melissa Rives
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What place is this that you appear?
and there from which I cannot flee
the quicksand of this sacred ground
does not relinquish its hold on me

Buried beneath hot sulfured pockets
interspersed with the virgin mud
dreams are filtered pure and bound
by weak hormone, flesh and blood

What emotion there carries me?
only to thrash and tear me apart
drawing me then eternally to you
to anxiously feast upon a heart

My body becomes your possession
and you do with me as you please
taking me into the nether night
coming and going like the breeze

What power have you over me?
that you appear within all my dreams
those fantasies I once thought lost
in the current of flowing streams

Running to the edge of waterfalls
where I have hurtled to the floor
only to reach your fertile valley
where you open yet another door

What secret lies within your magic?
I am in your power as you can tell
and my will is no longer my own
as I am firmly within your spell

What place is this where I am lost?
and yet I find that I wish to stay
It is the garden of your beating heart
that I have been guided to all the way

© 2003 Amor Sabor

*Dedicated to Melissa Rives for her crystalline pure heart and soul and ability to reach deeply with her voice. Her masterful delicate hand is guided naturally through a deep rooted love thus inspiring masterpiece poetry.

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 Reviews of "What Place is This (Melissa's Garden) Dedicated to Melissa Rives"
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on December 13, 2007
A wonderful tribute to your friend. This one has a wide-eyed feel of admiration. Splendid poem:) Sheila

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on September 5, 2003
Amor,
Ah, c'est vrai... Melissa is a masterful poet. This poem is a wonderful tribute to Melissa.

An excellent write!
Tami

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on June 3, 2003
Amor,
This is so delicate, and so soul touching, just as Melissa's work is. You have an amazing talent for capturing the essence of each woman you dedicate a tribute to!
Pen on!

Hugs,
Maria

P.S. I know you do not write for public acclaim, but you really should consider doing a Chap book with these!

Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
Reviewed on June 3, 2003
Se magnifique

Reviewed by Tracey Hardie
Reviewed on June 3, 2003
Amor.. you have honored us all... you are truly a blessing...another beautiful write.

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on June 2, 2003
Wonderful write !

Reviewed by Aamie Burnley
Reviewed on June 2, 2003
... no one has a more well tended garden, nor a more loving heart than melissa. a wonderful tribute, well done and most well deserved. bravo!!!!!

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on June 2, 2003
Nothing left for me to say......

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on June 2, 2003
A very beautiful write Amor...Ty, Dani

Reviewed by mz kimi
Reviewed on June 2, 2003
so absolutely good!

Reviewed by Melissa Rives
Reviewed on June 2, 2003
Oh Amor, you've made me blush!!! I just got home today after being away all week and as my email came in I spied yours and couldn't believe my eyes! This is the most beautiful thing of beauty you have written and I am so honored!!! words fail me...this, though I shall forever cherish! Look at my site in the next few days and I'll have a new photo of me...in one of my favorite places...the woods! Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!!!

Reviewed by Marlene Dawn
Reviewed on June 2, 2003
Beautifully written...

*Marlene*

Reviewed by Sara Russell
Reviewed on June 2, 2003
Very romantic... an enjoyable read. I am sure that Melissa will be very touched by this poem.... Sara.

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on June 2, 2003
Amor, you do, indeed, know true beauty of spirit, for Melissa is certainly that. Her inspiration has brought from you a breathtaking piece.. filled with so many quotable lines.. you are a thoughtful poet. katy.

Reviewed on June 2, 2003
she's gonna love this

as do i

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on June 2, 2003
Amor,
This is gorgeous.
She is so special you captured her in beauty!
Peg

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on June 2, 2003
You do the most beautiful tributes that I have seen!

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on June 2, 2003
nice one

Reviewed on June 2, 2003
This was so very beautiful, I just loved your poem here..

Reindeer

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on June 2, 2003
A truly beautiful dedication to Melissa which I'm sure will delight her.I love the rhyme and flow of this poem and your words are exquisite.
Chrissie

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on June 2, 2003
Beautiful Armor..
I'm glad to read
you again, my friend..
I'm sure Melissa will
love this :)

~~Linda~~

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 2, 2003
Very nice of you to write this for her Amor
She's a sweet lady......

Reviewed on June 2, 2003
you are ever the gentleman, amor! this is absolutely lovely; melissa will be thoroughly touched by your generous tribute to her! (((HUGS))) and love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :)

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 2, 2003
What a treassure you are Amor! To have the talent to gauge each of those you pay tribute to in such a way as to match their personality and style, you are a genious! Melissa will adore this I'm sure, she is a special talent. She writes with expertise while maintaining a beauty and perfection of verse that's hard to beat.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 2, 2003
A masterpiece Amor!!

Love
Tinka :)

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on June 2, 2003
Another masterpiece from you, Amor. Lovely verses.

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on June 2, 2003
This belongs in a museum!
such a beautiful tribute to Melissa

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
Reviewed on June 2, 2003
delicately painted with the masters touch..

Kudo's to you for such a beautiful dedication to Melissa!

melanie

Reviewed on June 2, 2003
This is an absolute beauty, celebrating a beautiful feeling in honor of another absolute beauty.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on June 2, 2003
Amor, beautiful dedication and poem. I'm sure Melissa will love it.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on June 2, 2003
And a masterpiece this is. Lovely and powerful expression of love. Wonderful to read you again Amor.


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