Come to me, my Love
Spill your sweet secrets upon my body
for you are the inexhaustible source
and you hold the origins of all mankind
Nestled between thighs of milk and honey
Cradled in the pyramids of your bosom
and chiseled into the arch of your back
I remain refreshed in the pursuit of you
restless in the heat of the noisy night
in the stroking of the merciless clock
between the minutes of stray hormones
and painted hours on an ancient voyage
Shift your sands upon dunes of passion
when ships of need traverse the desert
Release the spirits from their cold tombs
and nurture me with your voice of caress
Contort my breathing with your whispers
so that I can scale the towers of intimacy
and harvest the sweet fruit of your trees
Let us elevate ourselves to those levels
that bring us face to face with our creator
to accurately reflect his love as designed
and that instinct constructed in his image
Come to me, my love
Let us alight to skies of another heaven
where the perpetual light of day shines
and lingers endless without a shadow
just as mine eyes cling to your beauty
while mine lips speak only your name
Baptize me in your pledges of sweat
toil with me under the saturated moon
where the energy of our colored sighs
reaches the depths of shapeless clouds
tinting them with our delight and pleasure
bringing us to the doorstep of dreams
where I can revel in adoration of you
and surface in the thread of your womb
Take me by the hand into your heart
so I can stand in the shadow of your soul
to sing the chorus of unforgettable love
and with the universe waiting at our door
Beautiful dedication!
Pretty lady and good poetry - so wonderful!
I hadn't seen your work in a while and stopped by to renew my spirit. Well done as always.
Nestled between thighs of milk and honey
Cradled in the pyramids of your bosom
and chiseled into the arch of your back
I remain refreshed in the pursuit of you
What a beautiful lady she is too,tell her Thank you from all of us for letting you share your gift of words,if she is your inspiration then she deserves nothing but admiration and praise because your work,your poems are indeed Gems.
oh my
Contort my breathing with your whispers
and
Baptize me in your pledges of sweat
oh wow!
yep!
wow!
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
How deeply felt are such words of love Amor…You Gigi is a lucky woman and you a fortunate man…my best to you both…Thank you for allowing us a peek into your heart of hearts…Such bliss to be seen…Dani
Amor,
She is beautiful, and your dedication to her, in life, and in this poem is beautiful. You are both blessed, and so is your son for having such loving parents, and parents who are so in love with eachother!
All the best to all three of you!
Hugs,
Maria
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
You are a very lucky man, and she deserves the best you have to give.
Amor,what a beautiful poem for a beautiful lady that is also your muse and she deserves all the accolades you can give her if she is the reason you write as you do! Thank her, for we who have the pleasure of reading your work!This is another in a long line of superb poetry from a gifted Bard!
Your work is some of the most beautiful, unique and powerful I have had the pleasure to read! Your idea for dedications amazingly insightful, you sir are a true poet and romantic!!! Bravo to you! Keep em coming!!!
Reviewed by Cherokee Sage (Reader)
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
She's a beautiful lady. Lucky man.
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
What a wonderful tribute to love, and what a lovely lady, Amor. Every line brims with your love and admiration. Congratulations on that anniversary too, and that new son of yours. You truly make beautiful music together. My best wishes for more of everything for you both [three].
Awesome! Wonderful, passionate declaration of love to Gigi!
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
Oh Amor, I couldn't help but weep when I read this masterpiece of love. She is an angel and so deserving of this. How wonderful it would be if every couple had this exceptional love. Thank you for sharing this with us.
An empathic young nurse driven to help and heal others since childhood after watching her mother languish for months before finally succumbing to cancer, Aziza Lopez abhors cruelty and suffering in any form. When she is assigned comatose patient Davi
Darlene
Another outstanding write!
Tami
Pretty lady and good poetry - so wonderful!
I hadn't seen your work in a while and stopped by to renew my spirit. Well done as always.
Nestled between thighs of milk and honey
Cradled in the pyramids of your bosom
and chiseled into the arch of your back
I remain refreshed in the pursuit of you
Shy
My very best wishes to both of you!
Gina
Reindeer
~Nikki~
so I can stand in the shadow of your soul..."
An exceptional tribute, dear. Captivating.
I could just cry at the beauty of your beloved Gigi and the passionate way you express your love for her. This is truly a poem to be cherished.
Contort my breathing with your whispers
and
Baptize me in your pledges of sweat
oh wow!
yep!
wow!
She is beautiful, and your dedication to her, in life, and in this poem is beautiful. You are both blessed, and so is your son for having such loving parents, and parents who are so in love with eachother!
All the best to all three of you!
Hugs,
Maria
Jill :)
This is overwhelmingly lovely and a perfect dedication to your love. I am sure she treasures it.
~Chrissie
One lucky beautiful lady she is!!
Sighhhhhhhhhhh!!
Most beautiful!!
Love
Tina