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Vivid Corners
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I vividly remember a song from long ago
composed by the sweat of heaving bodies
in the dim light of a blowing March wind
and yet the forgotten day was like night
and the night was an impotent forest
that mumbled something in its shadows

You peeled my skin with saddened eyes
and touched me with a foreign accent
while I sat trembling at the end of the bed
where you blindfolded me with promises
The vivid corners of your lust collected me
leaving my soul in a half-bleached vacuum

The morning is Tang in lead crystal chalice
each facet cut like a prism out of the box
diffusing dreams in a three dimensional ray
that unfolded upon the deep blue sheets
and saturated us in those unworldly colors
and permeated us despite our fatigued souls

Those vivid corners continue to gather dust
and cobwebs from the consistent neglect
and I begin to choke as I dwell in the memory
of something that we once shared long ago
for time has made me forget the evil in you
Yet I can still remember the axis of your smile

© 2003 Amor Sabor

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 Reviews of "Vivid Corners"
Reviewed by Lawrance Lux
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
Truly good. lgl

Reviewed on September 6, 2003
LONG HEALTHY AND INSPIRED LIFE TO AMOR SABOR.

This magnificent poem, "Vivid Corners" brings a consistent imagery and rhythm.

I have enjoyed reading a true poem filled with live feelings of memories depicted with an excellent lexicon. "Vivid Corners" is an enriching poetical WRITING.

I thank You, Inspired Poet!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi Benyehu (Reader)
Reviewed on September 6, 2003
This magnificent poem, "Vivid Corners" brings a consistent imagery and rhythm.

I have enjoyed reading a true poem filled with live feelings of memories depicted with an excellent lexicon. "Vivid Corners" is an enriching poetical WRITING.

I thank You, Inspired Poet!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on September 5, 2003
This is mighty good stuff, Amor! Well done! :D (((HUGS))) and love, your Texas friend, Karen Lynn.

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
Reviewed on September 4, 2003
Awesome write, Amor.. just terrific..
Jenni

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on September 4, 2003
Oooooo Amor such a romantic piece with a touch of sad vulnerability at the end the so expertisely haunts...
"Those vivid corners continue to gather dust
and cobwebs from the consistent neglect
and I begin to choke as I dwell in the memory
of something that we once shared long ago
for time has made me forget the evil in you
Yet I can still remember the axis of your smile"
AWESOME, PASSIONATE AND HAUNTING...NOW THIS IS POETRY!!!!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Joyce Rapier
Reviewed on September 4, 2003
Once again you have managed to float us upon silky fibers. Great write. I enjoyed it very much.

Reviewed by Sara Russell
Reviewed on September 4, 2003
A wonderful romantic poem, all the more romantic for disclosing the poet's own vulnerability in love, being at the mercy of a predatory lover. This poem is brave as well as eloquent... thanks for sharing it with us here, Amor.

Sara.

Reviewed by Patricia Gomes
Reviewed on September 4, 2003
"...The morning is Tang in lead crystal chalice
each facet cut like a prism out of the box
diffusing dreams in a three dimensional ray
that unfolded upon the deep blue sheets..."

THAT is indeed poetry!

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on September 3, 2003
NOW THIS is POETRY!!!!!!!! WOOOOO HOOO! I MISSED reading stuff like this! I love your tender mind! Very sultry, tactful and it was appreciated for all of the good poetry that it is!!! YOU KNOW what you were doing when you wrote this! Bleeding human emotions...you tap into place Amor! And YOOOOOOOu know it!

Thank you... to my library this goes!
Emilie

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on September 3, 2003
Powerful and Vivid!

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
Reviewed on September 3, 2003
"The vivid corners of your lust collected me
leaving my soul in a half-bleached vacuum"

Great imagery, Amor. Excellent!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 3, 2003
Amor this is such a compelling write, poignant and such vivid imagery. Excellence as always.

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on September 3, 2003
Very powerful Amor! Bill Murray

Reviewed by Digital Fairy
Reviewed on September 3, 2003
Absolutely spellbinding, true poet of the heart... Beautiful as always :)

--Karissa

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Reviewed on September 3, 2003
This is perfection! ~Z~

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on September 3, 2003
Perfect.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on September 3, 2003
Well Amor this is just lovely. Tender, passionate, full of longing and sweetness. Beautifully penned as well. Lisa

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on September 3, 2003
This is poetry at its best. A masterpiece of vivid imagery and beauty. Superb.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 3, 2003
perfect imagery... luv how it ends...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 2, 2003
superbly done Amor!!

missed you!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on September 2, 2003
your work never disappoints

enjoyed the read

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on September 2, 2003
What a beautifully vivid piece. I especially like:

"diffusing dreams in a three dimensional ray
that unfolded upon the deep blue sheets"

The twist at the end caught me off guard.

~Jackie~


Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on September 2, 2003
I call this a true gem !

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on September 2, 2003
vivid angles delicately placed within the corner of your poem...very good piece.

Reviewed on September 2, 2003
Such beautiful poetry, such a lovely poem, I loved this so much,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
Reviewed on September 2, 2003
Vivid corners was vivid indeed.
I concur with those lines, you peeled my skin
with saddened eyes and touched me with a
foreign accent..., blew my mind. Excellent
write.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 2, 2003
I love the imagery you use in your writes. Great write!

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on September 2, 2003
You peeled my skin with saddened eyes <-----Ohhhhh Lordy......that is beauty personified.....You are amazing......ty, Dani

Reviewed on September 2, 2003
Wonderful choice of words, Amor!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on September 2, 2003
Awesome writing Amor........

Reviewed by Jeanette Foresta
Reviewed on September 2, 2003
All I could say is, you get in there, wow!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 2, 2003
Amor, you are a metaphorical genius! Among other things;-)....Brilliant poetry!

Reviewed by L M (Reader)
Reviewed on September 2, 2003
Excellent metaphoric images.....
this is really good.
LM


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