Lilly was a grape
She hung from the vine like Morning glories
Entrapping my soul with her tall lean body
Her love was a walnut in the shell
Perched like a finch over a plum mound
She arched her back in a kind of habit
While wiggling her hips into place
Shifting like sand on the Sahara
While I was hungrily floating above
Her belly was a slender thin thread
That connected her abdomen and torso
As if it were suspended by a wire
And I walked a tight rope in between
Lilly was a grape
When she kissed it turned my skin sweet
Feeding me with cherries and chocolates
Her breasts were accusative
Of crimes against nature and humanity
Symmetrically carved envelopes
Mailed directly to the animal in me
Their diameter told stories of lust
They were the piñatas at festivals
Where everyone got drunk and merry
And a thousand fools would pass out
And wake up on the floor crying
If they would be able to survive the storm
Lilly was a grape
Her jaw was an icy precipice
Where avalanches were born
And I would be overrun by ghosts
Of men that have tried before me
To scale her essence to glory
To ponder her natural beauty
Lilly was a grape
And how many times did I consume her?
Just as my desire for her consumed me
And when I partook of her essence
I went on a non-stop feeding frenzy
Knowing that I could never be full
Her lovemaking was my addiction
Each time that I took what she gave
Was as intoxicating as the first time
Lilly was a grape
Firm and yet tender as ripened fruit
Her youth inspired stone to melt
Her body was a monument
Chiseled by the gods
Each with his own version of art
And no one could fault their design
It was flawless and I could not resist
A taste of her was a taste of heaven
Leaving me always wanting more
I find nothing but shame for myself
Because I am too weak to stop
Knowing that I will always want her
Beautifully written, the passion ...so intense of wanting and needing this erotic love making... It brings the reader in and never let's them go.... Give a warm sensation inside.... I loved it. Thank you for sharing Amor :)
I'll never look at a grape the same way again; the next time I eat one, I'll think of this write! LOL (((HUGS))) and love, your friend, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D You are truly amazing, Amor! And so is this write!
Reviewed by Woman Words (Reader)
Reviewed on September 6, 2003
I will never think of a grape the same again...sensually entrancing
Amor,
(Thanks for repost.) This is a terrific read - beginning to end! The imagery, divine; the flow, superb; and your words, magical! A real keeper, this one.
This poem inspired me to melt! (My dream is about control. My life feeling out of it. I try to control it in my dreams, however harmless and fun to do.) But this here is really sensual!
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 6, 2003
Your imagery is fantastic and your words as smooth as any poet could wish for. All my senses have been delighted with this write!
The Matchmaker:
Angela Calminetti, mother of five, New Age practitioner and gifted psychic and telepath, is proud of her family ties and does everything she can to make sure that all of her younger siblings are as happy in love and marriage
Destiny's Journey, judged Best Western in the Easychair Bookshop competition.
Family deception kept Jennifer O’Malley from marrying her first love ten years ago, West Point officer, Glen Herrington. Now a Civil War widow, she leaves war-torn Richmo
filled with immense and intense imagery!
A Sensuous and free flowing write~Amor
Keep penning and best of luck!
~Nikki~
Jenni
yes,the pleasure
well....as long as Lilly wasn't an ape,that's cool.As always your metaphore is excellent.
Excellent write...indeed....
Vesna
EXQUISITE......loved every line...very moving...floria
(Thanks for repost.) This is a terrific read - beginning to end! The imagery, divine; the flow, superb; and your words, magical! A real keeper, this one.
Tami
~Chrissie
Love Tinka
Reindeer
Vivid imagery and the
words have a magical
flow. I loved this.
~~Linda~~
This is sooooo beautiful to read. I like it so much. There's beauty in every line and the imageries were wonderful!
Sandie Anel a.k.a. May Lu :o)